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Rose Parade

. The flames 
. . inside 
. . . cold blue
. . you made,
. Watch a wilting 
. . rose parade
. . . Drowning roses 
. . losing color,
. Beauty, all, 
. . will kill another,
. . . Killed by 
. . crashing blue 
. cascade

. . Burning hatred; 
. . . frozen blue
. . Searching for a 
. golden hue
. . Where's the 
. . . sunlight 
. . casting light
. On rose parades, 
. . clear cascades,
. . . and all the life 
. . we thought
. we knew?

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  1. Date: 2/10/2012 10:26:00 PM

    Masterpiece of thought.

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 7:56:00 AM

    Dear, Dana,, thank you for the comment.... it might have been the birthday blues i was,, referring too.. beauty is not the kind of development in my life... even though i'm a strong believer that beauty is a form of life one has to conceivably find... even if we feel it or not... enjoyed your poem very much,..p.d. ..

  1. Date: 10/6/2011 6:47:00 PM

    Love the heat of the flame with the cold of the blue Dana. You sprinkle the rhyme so creatively throughout. Nicely done :)

  1. Date: 9/12/2011 6:30:00 PM

    what does this mean?? blue krystal cascade? I am not familiar....

    Smith Avatar Dana'lynn Smith Date: 9/12/2011 8:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Read the "About Poem" a cascade is a steep waterfall