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GOOD BYE

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GOOD BYE

Mutely, tearfully Swallowed up, submerged in grief Remembering calls You may leave us a message— At the sound of the tone please… Caryl Ramsdale Copyright © 2011 All rights reserved. Tanka Poetry Form September 10, 2011 ~* Please pray for those left behind on that fateful day, September 11, 2001. *~ My "heartfelt condolences" to the brave families of 911. “Remembering 9/11” poetry contest sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire ~1st Place~ 9/14/2011

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  1. Date: 10/9/2011 10:02:00 AM
    WoW! I cnn feel the total rejection in this. A good write. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 9/18/2011 11:08:00 AM
    What a deserving first place, just an amazing write, sadly beautiful.. and thanks for your ever comments and support of my poetry~~

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/19/2011 10:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the congratulations Constance. Your comments are always appreciated my friend. CR
  1. Date: 9/17/2011 10:20:00 AM
    Grabbed me by My Throat!

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/19/2011 10:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading and thanks for your comment Frank! CR
  1. Date: 9/17/2011 9:48:00 AM
    You've said it all in just a few lines - others have taken hundreds of pages....

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/19/2011 10:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Susan, the 911 phone calls that aired nailed me to the wall. It was heart wrenching for me. I appreciate your comment. CR
  1. Date: 9/17/2011 8:25:00 AM
    congratulations to you on the personal way you brought this one home to the heart, Caryl.

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/19/2011 10:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for stopping by to read and congratulate Robert. I appreciate! CR
  1. Date: 9/17/2011 6:07:00 AM
    It's a gem with a message,Caryl.You are Aversatile writer.LUV.FABIYAS M V

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/19/2011 10:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Fabiyas, I always appreciate and look forward to your critiquing comments. Thanks again. CR
  1. Date: 9/16/2011 1:59:00 PM
    This really is a beauty, Caryl

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/19/2011 10:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jack. You create and leave behind some pretty good ones yourself. Have a great day my friend. CR
  1. Date: 9/15/2011 10:26:00 PM
    CAryl, Congratulations on your well deserved win!

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/19/2011 10:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Andrea! CR
  1. Date: 9/15/2011 5:39:00 PM
    Paralyzed in fear and speechless...oh yes, this is awesome, Caryl. I also love the 4th line that makes it ultrapersonal. Congrats to u, Gwendolen

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/19/2011 10:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for stopping by to read and comment my friend. I do appreciate. CR
  1. Date: 9/15/2011 5:26:00 PM
    A touching write that deserves to be on top... always Michael

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/19/2011 10:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Michael...thank you sir! I appreciate your comments and congratulatory remarks. Have a great day my friend. CR
  1. Date: 9/15/2011 3:49:00 PM
    Very moving piece. Many congratulations to you, Caryl : )

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/19/2011 10:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jack! CR
  1. Date: 9/15/2011 12:47:00 PM
    so much grief. I like how you made something so routine as answering the phone, mean so much. congratulations on your win :)

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/19/2011 10:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Susan! CR
  1. Date: 9/15/2011 10:58:00 AM
    Nicely said. Congratulations on your 1st place win Caryl

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/19/2011 10:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for stopping by Bob. Your encouragement is greatly appreciated. CR
  1. Date: 9/15/2011 10:11:00 AM
    Very expressive work..Enjoyed..Congrats..Sara

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/19/2011 10:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks my friend. CR
  1. Date: 9/15/2011 12:06:00 AM
    Oh, this brings goosebumps. Well done, congratulations on this poem. You honour them well. Lee

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/19/2011 10:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the congratulations...your remarks are appreciated my friend. CR
  1. Date: 9/15/2011 12:03:00 AM
    so well expressed; no wonder it's tops, caryl..sunniest congrats on your special win :) huggs

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 8:31:00 PM
    Those last messages, those voices beyond graves...very emotional. Congratulations on your top win. Best, iolanda

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/19/2011 10:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Iolanda, thank you for your encouraging comments. CR
  1. Date: 9/14/2011 8:20:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Caryl! Kim

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/19/2011 10:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks! CR
  1. Date: 9/14/2011 8:11:00 PM
    Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Carolyn, Caryl

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/19/2011 10:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for taking the time to congratulate! Your words are always an encouragement my friend. CR
  1. Date: 9/14/2011 6:24:00 PM
    Fine master piece,Caryl.Congratulations on your well deserved win...may God continue to guide and protect those left behind....

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