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The Mystery of a Strange Cat

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The Mystery of a Strange Cat

As the mourners had left,the holy showers ceased.
Still, the drops of agony fell on from the eaves of heart.
Then a forlorn crow fluttered its wet wings.

The waif cats always roamed in the yard,
But that dark night, a strange cat prowled to the portico.
Its eyes resembled the father’s, who was cremated hours back.

Moss of home clung on its eyes, but there was no tongue in the cat eyes.
Yet,the silent symbols were so strong. 
At either side of the cat eyes, the father and the son stood helplessly.

Later, I heard the mobile barks, which chased the cat to a distant rural crematorium.
And that strange cat never returned.
But its mystery remains still with the urn.


 

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  1. Date: 10/24/2014 11:47:00 AM
    You are so full of mystery, I will sit with this one awhile, until enlightenment arrives, thanks for sharing xxx

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    Date: 10/25/2014 8:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rose
  1. Date: 5/30/2012 9:32:00 AM
    Another win for this one !! Congrats !! Angels unaware?? Perhaps....the often visit you know....

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 6:22:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#179 Contest" Fab. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 9:10:00 PM
    Chilling !! Captivated from the first line....well done !! Congrats on your well deserved win.

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 8:45:00 PM
    Fabiyas, congratulations on your win in Brian's Contest! Very well done! I love the ending stanza...beautiful, strong...great job! Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 6:08:00 PM
    An eerie tale, Fabiyas. It seemed to me like reincarnation! Congrats on your HM.

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 4:24:00 PM
    Congrats on your win with your very creepy write! I love it!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 6:16:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Give Me Your Best Shot" contest Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/15/2011 11:39:00 AM
    Congratulations on your fourth place win. I really enjoyed Reading your poem! Lori

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 6:22:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win in the contest of John Freeman, Fabiyas

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 9:01:00 PM
    Congrats. on a special win Fabiyas. Hugs,Vie

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 7:48:00 PM
    Very mysterious and almost eerie. Congratulations, Fabiyas

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 5:42:00 PM
    Quite a mysterious cat, Fabiyas. I enjoyed your mystery presentation. A worthy one and congratulations on your win. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 9/27/2011 4:13:00 PM
    Interesting and scary write..Halloween work just a few weeks early..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 9/25/2011 3:12:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart Constance's "A Creepy, Scary, Haunted House" contest Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/23/2011 3:15:00 PM
    I enjoyed your piece here. Very unique. I agree with you Fabiyas signs are very important. Love,Vie

  1. Date: 9/23/2011 7:27:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win in the contest of Constance, Fabiyas

  1. Date: 9/23/2011 12:43:00 AM
    I got shivers. Well written Fabiyas

  1. Date: 9/23/2011 12:32:00 AM
    Congrats Fabiyas on another awesome win with this haunting poetry my friend...luv..

  1. Date: 9/22/2011 10:17:00 PM
    Congrats. on your special win. Love,Vie

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