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Sundance

Long bright golden shafts,
Dance on vast verdant pastures:
Waltzing of the sun.

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  1. Date: 3/9/2013 1:29:00 PM

    I've only read your first three pieces, but I can tell already that I'm going to enjoy your work. My intention is to read them all, which will take some time. I'll comment as I go. Very nice work. Jack

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno Date: 3/9/2013 1:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you
  1. Date: 9/9/2011 8:30:00 PM

    TGIF!! Enjoyed the write!

  1. Date: 9/9/2011 7:37:00 PM

    I can see the scene..I see the sun waltzing across that pasture...Good luck if for a contest..Winning material for sure..Enjoyed..Sara