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When the Tab Comes Due

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When the Tab Comes Due

Frail humans we are and mistakes are made, but there will be a time to pay for pain inflicted on others. Run swiftly from dark clouds hovering above, baggage like an albatross around our necks -- cast it aside. Commit to offering kind words, compassion to all, bestowing brotherly love. Make amends when possible for harmful acts, even negative thoughts, and promote harmony. When we stand at heaven’s gate, we’ll not be asked about material possessions, but how much love we gave. The prince and the pauper will be judged as equals when the tab comes due.
*Entry for Paula’s “How Due You Dew” contest Written September 8, 2011

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  1. Date: 9/19/2011 4:00:00 PM

    A pleasure to experience this read..

  1. Date: 9/18/2011 7:41:00 AM

    Congratulation my friend for your grand win. Thanks for sharing, bl

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 1:59:00 AM

    Congratulations, on your big win,,, hehehe the title got my curiosity,... your a wonderful poet... thank you for sharing,..p.d.

  1. Date: 9/15/2011 11:06:00 PM

    I don't know how I missed reading this contest list of winners but there you are with your beautiful poetry. Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 9/15/2011 10:14:00 PM

    Carolyn, your writing is superb. This is a beautiful poem. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. Well done and congratulations on your first place win. Lee

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 7:13:00 PM

    I like the last line ''The prince and the pauper will be judged as equals when the tab comes due.'' it's my favourite line

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 1:07:00 PM

    Nice write,Carolyn.Congratulations on your well deserved win in Paula`s "How Due You Dew"contest...

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 8:34:00 AM

    so many people don't seem to realize this or if they do, don't act accordingly. my husband was talking the other day about this guy that thought he was so important because he knew all these people, a real name dropper, and because he had a fancy title and nice car, and we were both like, who cares? are the people at the pearly gates going to care? you're right that it's all about love, not possessions, not who you know. congrats on your win with this!

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 3:22:00 AM

    a timely reminder, carols.. toppers!... congrats on your glowing win! :) huggs

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 9:35:00 PM

    Congratulation for your grand win. I knew. bl

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 8:45:00 PM

    beautifully penned piece Carolyn, congrats on your win in the contest

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 2:16:00 PM

    An amazing write from you Carolyn.So true and thought provoking above words are.Congratulations on your 1st place win.

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 12:05:00 PM

    Congratulations on your first place win!!!!!! I really enjoyed reading your beautiful poem!!!----Lori

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 11:40:00 AM

    Yes, indeed - lovely piece, my friend

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 11:24:00 AM

    What a gift this positive message is! A lovely win Carolyn, and well deserved!!

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 11:23:00 AM

    ahhh so true and kindness is its own reward! BIG BIG congrad's so nice to see you back in the #1 spot! light & love

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 9:31:00 AM

    Excellent writing. Congratulations, Carolyn. Dinda :)

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 8:22:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved top spot win Carolyn. Hope you have a smile on your face today my friend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 7:51:00 AM

    congrats on your win.. live it up..love cory

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 3:46:00 AM

    hey Carolyn congrats on your win,very powerful and gentle at the same time..David

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 1:45:00 AM

    Big Win Congratulations!!! I knew this one was worthy...CR

  1. Date: 9/12/2011 10:27:00 PM

    Very nice! 1st place def belongs to you :-)

  1. Date: 9/12/2011 10:22:00 PM

    Congrats on your fantastic, thought provoking and deeply meaningful write, Carolyn. Your words struck deep chords, not only for me, I'm sure, but for many. Thanks as well for your comments on my poems. Though, I'm very moved that you were touched by MY story, I'm more honoured that you shared YOUR own story. Know that I consider that a TRUE gift. Good work, this, one worth savouring again...

  1. Date: 9/10/2011 10:37:00 PM

    I love this,Carolyn. YOu did your on the serious side of mine. It is very poetic and sure to place high!

  1. Date: 9/10/2011 5:06:00 PM

    Beautiful sentiment, and how true your words are. goo luck in contest. harry

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  1. Date: 9/10/2011 10:22:00 AM

    You said it so well. Should post high on Paula's placement list. Very well done. You speak my thoughts! CR

  1. Date: 9/10/2011 8:32:00 AM

    This is really really good. I enjoyed reading your poem Carolyn. Thank you for your kind comment in I loved you so, it wasn't my story I told but that of a close friend as it was relayed to me. Very sad but true. Love, Vie

  1. Date: 9/10/2011 1:54:00 AM

    it's been a while since I have read your stuff (and been on the Soup) What a treat to come back to this poem. You have got a really good heart and it shows in your writing. I have always looked up to your works (and You). I am moving back to Florida in the next few weeks. We will be neighbors again! Love and Respect , ~JOEY

  1. Date: 9/9/2011 7:01:00 PM

    a revelation of a reminder my friend. In this fast and crazy world we need remind ourselves of that each day ... because really... there is nothing else . I prove that to myself daily by continuing to attempt the "else" . Good luck in this contest, Carolyn. God bless you a bunch

  1. Date: 9/9/2011 5:31:00 PM

    uplifting masterpiece . the last line brings poetry to the people. never thought that such a last line could have so much impact.