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Foreplay melodic love her bangles' symphony sleepless night's moonlight sonata prelude © 2011 kashinath karmakar ========================= Placement:3rd; (September 2011) By:kashinath karmakar Contest:Melody of Cinquain Sponsor:Nette Onclaud

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  1. Date: 9/23/2011 3:34:00 AM

    wow... very nice Kashinath...hot....smiles...chiquita

  1. Date: 9/12/2011 8:58:00 PM

    Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,kashinath

  1. Date: 9/12/2011 4:37:00 PM

    congrats on a great win in the contest, very romantic cinquain, a perfect example of the form :-)

  1. Date: 9/12/2011 9:10:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Melody Of Cinquain" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/11/2011 5:52:00 PM

    Ohhhhh MY ..this is my #1 a fav too CONGRAD's light & love

  1. Date: 9/11/2011 3:03:00 PM

    Different..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 9/11/2011 2:38:00 PM

    Awesome poem!! congratulations on your well deserved win!!!!!!!-----Lori

  1. Date: 9/11/2011 3:38:00 AM

    hey Kash congrats on your great win..David

  1. Date: 9/10/2011 11:54:00 PM

    my, my... hot and dead on. nice one, kash, congrats! ~N

  1. Date: 9/10/2011 11:39:00 PM

    Congratulations Kash, Nice visuals here, love the bangle line. Cheers Marg.

  1. Date: 9/10/2011 11:19:00 PM

    Congrats Kash on terrific third place win with these brilliant lines of Cinquain my friend.. wow..

  1. Date: 9/10/2011 10:32:00 PM

    Congrats on your win! Kim

  1. Date: 9/10/2011 10:29:00 PM

    This is SO deserving of a win, my friend. A big congratulations to you. Please post your diazan!!

  1. Date: 9/10/2011 9:24:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win. Well done. Lee

  1. Date: 9/10/2011 3:00:00 PM

    YummY...Bangles fused with Moonlight Sonata...give me more!==="she tells me in her bedroom voice...cmon Honey...let's go make SOME NOISE! It's just another Manic Monday....Wish it were Sunday...ECT :)

  1. Date: 9/9/2011 10:32:00 PM

    Kash, actually this one is better but not becuase of words or syllable count. You made it go better by the content rule. You made the last word now equal to the first word. And you did what Nette asked you about using each line for a specific purpose. For me, that made the difference. Sure to garner a lot of points!

  1. Date: 9/9/2011 9:58:00 PM

    I like it , I like it. I hear the music. good luck Kash. cheers Marg.

  1. Date: 9/9/2011 8:01:00 PM

    The flames rise higher Kashi. Can't get much more passion in this one It has to win!

  1. Date: 9/9/2011 6:48:00 PM

    Awesome Kash! She'll love this one, I'm sure. Good luck in the contest and have a great weekend!!

  1. Date: 9/9/2011 4:24:00 PM

    oh lovely I'm sure nette will enjoy it! light & love

  1. Date: 9/9/2011 2:36:00 PM

    awhoooo.. this is much, much better, kashi!!.. come visit; got a new one!... :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 9/9/2011 12:41:00 PM

    Awesome poetry Kash. Should be a winner.Love, Vie

  1. Date: 9/9/2011 12:19:00 PM

    WELL PENNED! Lovely Thoughts from your lovely Poetic Mind.

  1. Date: 9/9/2011 11:57:00 AM

    captivating lines so mesmerizing ..intoxicating Kash.. music and romance ..a forever blend like no other.. incredible luv..good luck..

  1. Date: 9/9/2011 11:21:00 AM

    An absolute delight to read Kashinath, a fantastic short piece. Thank you for sharing this GEM, have a wonderful weekend :)

  1. Date: 9/9/2011 10:50:00 AM

    Oh Kash, how sexy does it get... love it.. "her bangles symphony" and thanks for sending me in the right direction, you know what I mean.. I did the edit, if you care to have a look.. love, dear heart

  1. Date: 9/9/2011 10:19:00 AM

    telling sensuous string... evocative but something feels amiss...the intake of breath...antara kumbhaka!

  1. Date: 9/9/2011 10:02:00 AM

    Beautiful cinquain, Kash

  1. Date: 9/9/2011 9:33:00 AM

    Very nice. So much said in so few words.