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shy me

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shy me

There I went
Like a little child in a vent
Stood on my feet but still i bent
Just to echo “u grant?”
She was the cutest flower I've seen
In ma castle ill make her queen
Her eyes were like petals I've never seen
I thought of so many ways not to sin
But just think was already a sin
She would be the center of my scene
But her presence is already a sin
I thought of the best pick up lines
But it wouldn't move minds
Then i thought of a speech
But it couldn't mend close the bridge
Her lips were so cute
Her face so smooth
And when she talked I felt like a fool

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  1. Date: 9/8/2011 4:29:00 PM
    Wow I like this...welcome to PS...Marty

    carlson Avatar ken carlson
    Date: 9/19/2011 10:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oh thanks very much appreciated i hope we could share what we all have
  1. Date: 9/8/2011 7:20:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Ken. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol