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passion

   


       wild hearts beneath a lover's moon in naked truth and splendor of want 





             by Lori McClure  9/7/11
             for contest:  Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~  
             Write it in one line, Please  
               

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  1. Date: 11/17/2011 9:52:00 PM

    very romantic, and I take it you won? a very belated congrats then!

  1. Date: 9/19/2011 9:18:00 PM

    How can you say so much in only one line? Romantic for sure.

  1. Date: 9/15/2011 7:55:00 PM

    Oh yes!! Very nice! :-)

  1. Date: 9/12/2011 10:40:00 AM

    I would like to take this time to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. I would also like to let you know I always enjoy reading your wonderful poetry Lori. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/11/2011 12:20:00 AM

    Oh yeah, great write! well done and congratulations on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 9/10/2011 7:20:00 PM

    congrats on your contest win with this beautiful monoku, passionate indeed :-)

  1. Date: 9/10/2011 5:02:00 PM

    Placement congratulations for your win in the "Write it in one line, Please" contest. CR

  1. Date: 9/10/2011 1:21:00 PM

    This is really breathtaking Lori as Linda has mentioned...congrats on your win.

    Lucas McClure Avatar Lori Lucas McClure Date: 9/10/2011 2:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your kind comments. greatly appreciated-----Lori
  1. Date: 9/10/2011 10:57:00 AM

    Many congrats for all your wins, Lori : )

    Lucas McClure Avatar Lori Lucas McClure Date: 9/10/2011 2:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your comment!!-----Lori
  1. Date: 9/10/2011 8:22:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Write It In On Line, Please" contest. A very well deserved placement Lori. Love, Carol

    Lucas McClure Avatar Lori Lucas McClure Date: 9/10/2011 2:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Carol for your kind comments!---Lori
  1. Date: 9/10/2011 3:20:00 AM

    Congratulations on the win in the contest of Constance,Lori

    Lucas McClure Avatar Lori Lucas McClure Date: 9/10/2011 2:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your comments!---Lori
  1. Date: 9/10/2011 12:11:00 AM

    CONGRATS LORI ON ANOTHER WINNING POEM WITH THIS BREATHTAKING MONOKU LUV.. PASSION..A FAV SUBJECT OF MINE ..OH..

    Lucas McClure Avatar Lori Lucas McClure Date: 9/10/2011 2:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your kind comments Linda!!--Lori
  1. Date: 9/9/2011 10:43:00 AM

    soupmail

  1. Date: 9/9/2011 8:39:00 AM

    You depict such a lovely picture here. Good luck in contest. Love,Vie

  1. Date: 9/8/2011 2:53:00 PM

    I enjoyed reading your poetry today Lori. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/8/2011 6:35:00 AM

    Lori, extremely romantic, best of luck..David

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 9:54:00 PM

    Wonderful romantic write lovely Lady Lori enjoyed....with love....old Jack

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 9:13:00 PM

    Describes perfectly what it is all about Lori.

    Lucas McClure Avatar Lori Lucas McClure Date: 9/10/2011 2:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for you kind comments!----Lori