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Hope Comes In Light Through Shades

wind
river
grain in field
much travelled road
gone

life
labors
working hard
passing by fast
hard

Marty Owens
Turn on the Lanterne contest

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  1. Date: 9/6/2011 10:22:00 PM

    Marty, when I saw the picture, I too saw this idea in it. But I did not think how to say it so eloquently so I chose another route, though I think it's slightly similar idea!

  1. Date: 9/6/2011 10:22:00 PM

    (well, what I mean is that the mood was the same)

  1. Date: 9/6/2011 4:59:00 PM

    I like this one. Good luck in the "TURN ON THE LANTERNE” poetry contest as nette judges Marty. CR

  1. Date: 9/6/2011 1:50:00 AM

    awesome entry for the contest, good luck