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A WHITE CURTAIN FALLS

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A WHITE CURTAIN FALLS

Time unwinds where river tears spill
O’er river rock, when angels stand still.

Caryl Ramsdale Copyright © 2011 All rights reserved. Crystalline Poetry Form Caryl Ramsdale September 3, 2011 “Crystalline Euphony“ contest by john freeman 1st Place 9/4/201

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  1. Date: 6/7/2012 11:37:00 AM
    When I click on one of your poems I know it will be truly amazing Caryl. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/24/2011 3:29:00 PM
    Beautiful piece, Caryl. Love it

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 7:39:00 PM
    It's amazing how*tearing up* in so little words you can describe that so dramatically

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/16/2011 1:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Helen...I have been practicing writing each line of every poem like it is the only...and I've been concentrating on writing short poetry forms. I think my writing skills are improving because I write this way. Thanks for the encouragement. CR
  1. Date: 9/13/2011 12:23:00 PM
    Dear fellow poet: Taking a time out while I organize my collection of poetry forms. Be back soon! CR

  1. Date: 9/12/2011 10:34:00 AM
    I would like to take this time to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. I would also like to let you know I always enjoy reading your wonderful poetry Caryl. Love, Carol

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/16/2011 1:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I enjoy reading your works Carol. I learn from reading. Thanks you for always leaving behind a kind comment when you read mine. CR
  1. Date: 9/8/2011 11:33:00 PM
    such a well deserved win.Congratulations, CAryl.

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/16/2011 1:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Andrea your remarks are always an encouragement. CR
  1. Date: 9/6/2011 6:55:00 PM
    Contratulations on the first place win in the contest, Caryl

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/16/2011 1:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Dr. Mehta I appreciate your comments. Have a peaceful day filled with blessings! CR
  1. Date: 9/6/2011 10:00:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in John Moses Freeman's "Crystalline Euphony" contest Caryl. Love, Carol

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/16/2011 1:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Carol! CR
  1. Date: 9/5/2011 10:53:00 PM
    absolutely lovely, congrats on your well deserved first place win

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/16/2011 1:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading and commenting Francine. Have a fun day at the Soup! CR
  1. Date: 9/5/2011 6:40:00 PM
    Nice piece,fine rhymes,deserved win.Congratulations Caryl...

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/16/2011 1:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks! Have another creative day filled with blessings my friend. CR
  1. Date: 9/5/2011 4:01:00 PM
    Many congrats on all your wins, Caryl : )

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/16/2011 1:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Jack...thanks sir! CR
  1. Date: 9/5/2011 2:38:00 PM
    How lovely, Caryl. Congratulations on your first place in John's contest. Love, Carolyn

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/16/2011 1:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Carolyn. Your comments are appreciated. CR
  1. Date: 9/5/2011 9:38:00 AM
    Caryl, congratulations on your first place win with this magnificent write. Keep your wonderful poems flowing. Love, Glenna

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/16/2011 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much for the kind comment Glenna. Have a fun day at the Soup! CR
  1. Date: 9/5/2011 9:29:00 AM
    Congrats Caryl on your win..this is wonderful!

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/16/2011 1:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I appreciate your remarks kash...Have a great day! CR
  1. Date: 9/5/2011 9:16:00 AM
    Congrats on your win..I knew that it would..Sara

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/16/2011 1:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Sara! CR
  1. Date: 9/5/2011 7:18:00 AM
    Well written piece, and many congrats on your frst place win.....Michael

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/16/2011 1:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Michael: Thank you for the comments you leave behind. I appreciate your remarks! CR
  1. Date: 9/5/2011 7:00:00 AM
    Hey there Caryl, so glad to see this one on top :) Congratulations on your win with this beauty :)

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/16/2011 1:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wilma: You are always encouraging others. Thanks for encouraging me. CR
  1. Date: 9/5/2011 4:40:00 AM
    Well done Caryl with this lovely piece. I thought it would do well. many thanks . Marg

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/16/2011 1:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Margaret, Thank you! CR
  1. Date: 9/5/2011 3:00:00 AM
    hey Caryl congrats on a superb 1st place win, loved it first time round..David

  1. Date: 9/5/2011 2:49:00 AM
    Congrats Caryl on a dynamic first place win with these exquisite words of Crystalline Euphony luv.. enjoy top spot for top notch poetry..

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/16/2011 1:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I really appreciate your remarks Linda-Marie. Thank you! CR
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