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a break of dawn

of that fine day,
mornings magnificent brawn
and beautiful bay,
whose skylines soon would yawn,
a break of dawn

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  1. Date: 9/2/2011 10:13:00 AM

    Your poetry is always a pleasure to read no matter what you are writing about Johnny. Enjoy your weekend and keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/2/2011 3:32:00 AM

    I like that image of the skylines yawning!! It was nice seeing your poetry tonight, johnny.

  1. Date: 9/1/2011 10:20:00 PM

    What a way to start the day. That "yawn" line is so descriptive and brings the day to life in a beautiful way. PS I love you too and your wonderful verses but you already knew that didn't you?

  1. Date: 9/1/2011 5:04:00 PM

    so smooth a flow, johnny... breathtaking work with winning wishes if for a contest!..:) huggs, nette