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MORE DREAMS TO ROW

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the moon trickles down casting light afar her tasseled hair rippling on true hearts pressed surrounding a cape of pure, coupled stars while tender fingers hunger for her chest oh, can there be a scene like this more blessed? if life could pluck more days, let my age withdraw come love, for we have boat rides more to row and as sunrise prays with the mountaintop lapping against mauve fog the prairies keep just there, dawn sprinkles on each dewdrop waking the snooze of morning from its sleep how can a day hold glory half as deep? and if breaths could clear ripples of life’s glow come dream with me, for we have years to sow! ©

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  1. Date: 10/31/2012 11:02:00 AM

    This is so great nette. Thoroughly enjoyed. Congratulations

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 8:13:00 PM

    Great job, nette. Congrats. Nice going. love, Ralph

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 10:38:00 PM

    Another great poem. I love it. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:42:00 PM

    HI NETTE, ONCE AGAIN..:-), CONGRATULATIONS IN "Dana'lynn Smith" CONTEST... ALWAYS~ PD

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 3:21:00 PM

    very creative this one is. One of the best for imagery! Congrats on your well deserved win, Nette.

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 5:58:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win in Dana'lynn's "The Girl" contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 12:18:00 AM

    SUPER CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON AN EXTRAORDINARY WRITE AND TOP OF THE LINE WIN LUV .. ALWAYS A TREASURE TO VIEW YOUR CREATIVE STYLE ..OH .. 2 ..WELL JUST FOR U .. EYESIGHT FADING ..HARD TO READ REQUIREMENTS SOMETIMES .. WILL DO .. I SO LUV THE PHOTOGENIC INSPIRATION ..

  1. Date: 3/10/2012 12:10:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Nette! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 9:11:00 PM

    congrats Nette luv on another outstanding write and win for PD's #3 contest winning poems.. all your poems are top winners to me luv..

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 6:00:00 PM

    Golden years we all hope! Congrad's On Your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 3:05:00 PM

    congrats on your win in the contest nette; such a beautiful verse, the imagery stunning as always :-)

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 10:53:00 AM

    Good afternoon and congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "3rd place wins Only" contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 10:23:00 AM

    conrats on the placement Nette.........~sashi

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 10:09:00 AM

    NETTE,,.Congratulations! THANK YOU FOR THE SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

  1. Date: 10/10/2011 2:34:00 PM

    a difficult form done so well, with abundant personification,[oh, can there be a scene like this more blessed?] very Shakespearian! Congrad's on your win Light & love

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 10:09:00 PM

    Congrats. Nette on your beauty of a win. Love,Vie

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 5:21:00 PM

    Congrats Nette luv on an outstanding win with this incredible entry so expressing the dream theme my friend..enjoy with luv ..this big winner...

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 11:29:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning poem in Frank's "Dream" contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 10:57:00 AM

    Nicely done nette. Congratulations on your win in Dreams

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 10:27:00 AM

    I couldn't resist the title, Nette. Eye-catched my eyes to read it. Wonderful. Congrats on your win, in Dr. Ram and Frank H contest. Wow, 2 wins in a poem. Greatly written.

  1. Date: 9/6/2011 8:07:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Royal Rhyme" contest Nette. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 9/4/2011 9:47:00 AM

    Congrats Nette luv on another stupendous win with this extraordinary entry as only u can create my friend.. enjoy sweet success luv..

  1. Date: 9/4/2011 12:47:00 AM

    Nette, a pleasure to see your poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 9/3/2011 11:16:00 PM

    Congrats on the win in my contest, nette

  1. Date: 9/1/2011 3:55:00 PM

    Appreicated the way you have sewn this one up Nette..! a real flight of fantasy to enjoy..!

  1. Date: 9/1/2011 8:04:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/1/2011 7:18:00 AM

    OH, MAN! Nette, this is one of the best things I've EVER read, no joking! I swear, its better than BROWNING's Sonnets of the Portuguese. When you die, and that had better be in another 100+ years so you can get all that stuff out of you and onto paper, you MUST give your brain to science. There's a writer, Jane Urquhart, and she wrote a book called AWAY. It took me ages to read it because I kept rereading lines, dazzled by her craft... you do that to me, too! TOP SPOT I DEMAND! who'll disagrees?

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 11:28:00 PM

    Truly a glorious write! One of my favorites of your poems Nette! Keep em coming, I love em!!

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 10:02:00 PM

    your poetry has miles to flow, nette dear...good luck, jag

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 9:23:00 PM

    Smile, *^_^* “Tis Sooo Very Beautiful When One Can Touch to Feel Anothers Spirit Within Their Heavenly Words My Dear, Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Nette! *^_^* As I Walked Slowly Amid Serenity Through Your Beauties Very Own *^_^* I Found My Heart Stirred, Within The Softness of Your Voice, Whispering, Into Its Depths *^_^* Very Beautiful Painting of Love & Definitely, A Fave Amongst The Faves *^_^* And Thank You, for Warming Myself, With Your Treasures Visit!” === My Love Unto Your Beauty, & All You Love, Always & Forever, Jasper *

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