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Ela Jane at Eight

Cancer has  taken her eye and a lung
also her thyroid gland;
yet she has pluck and fortitude,
it's hard to understand.

Wthout a doubt she is Superclass
and much to be admired.
Her positive approach to life is great
and by all should be desired.


Dedicated to my grandaughter Ela Jane Dushku.

Robert Davidson - A Short Poem, Please.

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  1. Date: 9/14/2011 9:33:00 PM

    wonderful dedication

  1. Date: 9/3/2011 11:17:00 AM

    Heartfelt dedication Bob, ...congratulations on your poem's worthiness. Agape, Moses

    Davidson Avatar Robert Davidson Date: 9/4/2011 11:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks John for your kind comments Robert
  1. Date: 9/3/2011 10:12:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!------Lori

    Davidson Avatar Robert Davidson Date: 9/4/2011 11:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much Lori Robert
  1. Date: 9/3/2011 3:20:00 AM

    A Seventh Place Win Congratulations. CR

    Davidson Avatar Robert Davidson Date: 9/4/2011 11:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many thanks Caryl Robert
  1. Date: 9/2/2011 12:59:00 AM

    May your Granddaughter be guarded by an angel, keep her safe. My thoughts are with you, a touching dedication. Lee

    Davidson Avatar Robert Davidson Date: 9/4/2011 11:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Lee for these special words Robert
  1. Date: 9/1/2011 6:56:00 PM

    YES LOUD AND CLEAR. And many congrats on your win,Robert blessings from Paul

    Davidson Avatar Robert Davidson Date: 9/4/2011 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    very kind words thank you Robert
  1. Date: 9/1/2011 4:19:00 PM

    She sure is a fighter and she has spirit Robert.. Congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful dedication.. ;) Wilma

    Davidson Avatar Robert Davidson Date: 9/4/2011 11:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wilma you're a gem, thanks Robert
  1. Date: 9/1/2011 2:14:00 PM

    Congratulations on your placement in Constance La France's "A Short Poem, Please" contest Robert. Love, Carol

    Davidson Avatar Robert Davidson Date: 9/4/2011 11:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks once more for these lovely words Robert
  1. Date: 9/1/2011 1:14:00 PM

    Oh how sad for all of you. Congratulations on your win. I know how much one loves his or her grandchild. Joyce

    Davidson Avatar Robert Davidson Date: 9/4/2011 11:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Joyce so kind of you to comment Robert
  1. Date: 9/1/2011 11:33:00 AM

    hey Robert congrats on your win..david

    Davidson Avatar Robert Davidson Date: 9/4/2011 11:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey thanks David for your comments Robert
  1. Date: 9/1/2011 11:23:00 AM

    Congrats Robert on your exciting win with this profound poetry so touching luv.. lovely dedication too..

    Davidson Avatar Robert Davidson Date: 9/4/2011 11:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks so much Linda-Marie for such touching words Robert
  1. Date: 9/1/2011 11:03:00 AM

    Congratulations on the win, Robert

    Davidson Avatar Robert Davidson Date: 9/4/2011 11:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Dr. Ram for taking the time to comment on this poem Robert