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September

Sounds of school children readying for the new year
Evening’s light diminishes a little more each day
People put away lawn furniture and bring out their rakes
Television starts its new season of shows
Empty swimming pools are closed until next summer
Morning has a brisk scent in the air
Buses of yellow add to the early traffic
Everyone grabs a jacket or sweater when they head out the door
Remember summer and let it keep you warm until it comes again

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  1. Date: 4/27/2012 3:43:00 PM

    Very nicely written acrostic poem.

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 8:41:00 AM

    Great imagery... You bring out what all our lives revolve around in September and in a very real way. Congratulations on the win.

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 10:48:00 AM

    My apologies for missing so many contest results - many congrats on all your wins : )

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 11:42:00 PM

    Shani, you brought some new thoughts to September, nice to see such creativity. Well done and congratulations on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 9:55:00 PM

    Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol,Shani

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 7:49:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 6:29:00 PM

    Our summer was so short. Hoping September makes up for it. Nice writing Shani. Good luck. Thank you for your comments on my car poem. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 5:04:00 PM

    Nice job! Liked the 'buses of yellow' -- don't think I read anyone else writing about the 'back to school' part of the fall equation. Congrats! Cyndi

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 4:47:00 PM

    Many congrats to you, Shani : )

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 1:53:00 PM

    hey Shani congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 1:25:00 PM

    Shani, come visit me in Florida and you can swim until the end of November (at least). Enjoyed the many different events you described that are unique to September -- schools opening, new TV seasons and, for some people, jackets and sweaters. Great write! Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 1:15:00 PM

    well done, shani.… a happy blast of CHEERS to you for the great win..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 11:50:00 AM

    Shani, Great job. Congratulations on your second place in the Carol's "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNE." A great pleasure to see your poem in a worthy place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 11:48:00 AM

    Shani, Great job. Congratulations on your second place in the Carol's "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNE." A great pleasure to see your poem in a worthy place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 11:13:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in the "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNER" poetry contest sponsored by Carol Brown. CR

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 11:11:00 AM

    Congrats Shani on second place win with this cool write on Fall luv.. honored to share place with u...

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 10:41:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in my contest Shani. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/5/2011 11:04:00 PM

    'Boy, you really grasped well the month of September.I love the homey down to earth way you did yours. VERY nice!

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 3:37:00 PM

    u captured all this month holds Shani .. utterly beautiful in presentation of Acrostic words.. good luck in the contest ..luv..

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 3:32:00 PM

    Hey there Shani, loads of nostalgia in this write of yours.. Here in Cape Town we are awaiting Summer when you are saying goodbye to Summer.. Good luck for the contest ;) love Wilma

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 12:57:00 PM

    hey Shani good luck in the contest.. David

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 11:56:00 AM

    Thank you for supporting my contest Shani. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 11:48:00 AM

    Wonderful with the activities all can relate, Shani

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 11:27:00 AM

    love the last line. i like this poem, excellent write