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Lost Love - Gary Fields

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Lost Love - Gary Fields

Loss Lost Love

by~ GARY FIELDS

Why my love left?
I soon forget the reason's why
All that I remember
Is that she left such
An empty space
An empty trace
So many memories
Which can not be erased
And I die just a little inside
And time mean's nothing to me'
Fore you mean so much to me
              - And -
Then ever so slightly
I wish for quiet subtle change
             --------
And I don't know since when
But time just set's end on end
And smoke appears below
Which can choke a friend
A friend in need
Certainly not you love
And once again, ever so slightly
I wish for quiet suttle change
              --------
It has been three weeks (03) now
And things' are all in a clammer'
Thing's just seem to set end on end
And nothing seem's to matter
An I make a vowel for thee
In a time that is lost for- ever
             -------
O'h, how I wish to belong
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by~ Poet Destroyer

I can see the pain!
I came to you no longer.
Looking for answers, 
I cried till I could no more..

I shared'
I stared' 
At the empty space hiding in my heart,
I knew then that day was the end.
Thoughts ran like rivers,
flowing a stream down my face.
You picked the pieces up as I walked away.
With no more to open and say.
                       ~~~~~
When holding wasn't holding to me no more,
You opened up your heart, in hopes I could feel.

We cried into the night, 
until the early morn.
We scolded each other's pain,
searching and seeking each others heart.

As time drew, second begun to fade.
I saw our lovers nest fading, 
as the night grew thick.

The moment had arrived, 
why did we say goodbye?
                      ~~~~~
Now we sit alone,
reminiscing the past that vaporized into thin air. 
An empty trace'
An empty space'
                      ~~~~~
Oh! How I wish to belong!


A collaboration with * GARY FIELDS

My collaboration contest

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  1. Date: 3/18/2014 6:58:00 PM
    Dear xx: I had to come and take a look see because I really love this one. Lets' do it again sometimes'... Check my blog.. your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS Hope you ain't afraid of no Ghost!

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 4:21:00 PM
    this is amazing PD actually both of these are amazing...

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 9:29:00 AM
    WOW,,,wonderful write,,,,it seems i lived this tail,,,once or twice,,,just to end up with me saying the same thing.......

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 10:05:00 AM
    you give people a chance to collab with you and this is what you get .... great job!!!

  1. Date: 10/15/2011 3:02:00 PM
    AGain, perfectly in tune with the other poet!! I'm gonna do something in a second. Wait for it!

  1. Date: 9/18/2011 5:18:00 AM
    Hey...XX, Can I call you XX? the only thing's that matter is that you like my poetry. Because I like your's more that I like mind, Don't tell the SWEET HEART, whom ever that is..ha.ha.he.he.luv em^up! hic-up! getey up..haaa.aaa your friend in the infamous pen/G,FIELDS W/LOST OF luv

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 11:44:00 PM
    You have out done your self this time. I didn't realize that your the best. I underestimated you...This is fantastic but much much too short....Need to finish up! w/luv. your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS Make a day view on my side so that they can see just how good you are... plllleeeaase.!!!!!!

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 10:59:00 AM
    a good one. like how you repeated his lines at the end :)

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 8:24:00 AM
    OMGoodness. I think this is about the best one of the whole contest Linda & Gary. Just my opinion. Going to my favs. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 9:20:00 PM
    enjoyed your works of collaboration....

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 9:08:00 PM
    yes Gary is my friend in the pen as he always writes to me and he is very emphatic in his lines about luv.. a difficult life turned around now.. good luck to u both as need I say once again how terrific u compliment every one of us who have taken the challenge my friend.. am glad I am not judging this one ..my BFF ..PD... well am so bronze right now I don't recognize me .. great blog and happy 36.. u look like a 21 year old.. no wonder we are jive buddies. your BFF ... oh..forever..luv..

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 8:50:00 PM
    BRAVO-----BRAVO~~~~ Beautious :-)

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 8:47:00 PM
    My dearest GARY, this is the first poem I had problems posting. Than I had to cut the poem... lol.... we both had to many characters..... hope you don't mind... either than that... I had fun responding to your collaboration... many thanks for waiting on me... sorry I had to short cut the poem... have a nice one,..p.d.