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Second Hand Love

*This is not based on a true story, I cannot stress that enough.*

The days are lonely 
And the nights don't make sense
I went to look for The One 
And I was feeling tense

Walking down the High Street
Popped in to the Cash Converters store
I'm sure I missed a heartbeat
As I saw her lying on the floor

Used, in good condition
Deflated breasts, a sombre gaze
Beggars cant be choosers
Inviting look got me amazed

She doesn't nag, she doesn't moan
No monthly scarlet tears
Second hand love, second hand love
Stays for years and years..

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  1. Date: 1/31/2012 12:11:00 PM

    ''beggars can't be choosers''..well said..the concept of second hand love...aah very nice work..cheers !!!!!!!!!!

    Atkin Avatar Roman Atkin Date: 2/2/2012 2:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Haha thanks :)
  1. Date: 8/31/2011 7:58:00 AM

    I have been reading some very overwhelming poetry this morning Roman. I have enjoyed reading yours and hope to be reading more of it soon. Love, Carol

    Atkin Avatar Roman Atkin Date: 8/31/2011 10:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks but this isn't overwhelming surely?..