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Inside Out

inside the country.....................is a city
inside the city.......................is a district
inside the district...................is a house
inside the house.....................is a room
inside the room........................is a man
inside the man....................is a thought
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inside the thought..............is a country

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  1. Date: 8/27/2011 5:55:00 PM

    Nicely done. Well said. lee

    Churchley Avatar Peter Churchley Date: 8/27/2011 6:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    cheers Lee, appreciate you leaving a comment...
  1. Date: 8/27/2011 5:44:00 PM

    lol! Right back at the very start... this is a nice piece. Keep up the good work Peter!

    Churchley Avatar Peter Churchley Date: 8/27/2011 5:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    isn't it always the way lol....thank you Yohan