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IN A BLICK OF TIME

If I close my eyes, My heels would be melting in the white sandy beach of Msabweni, Maybe frying in the warm salty coastal waters, So deep in search of beautiful shells to infest love to my heart, Snowed with happiness watching sharks bounce in water, What more can I ask for if not eat salty fish? Refreshing my mouth with fresh coconut juice, The traditional salivating Pilau for my ever shouting stomach,
ELIZABETH LEPAPA INSPIRED BY "Close your eyes and click your heels" contest Sponsored by: Michael J. Falotico

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  1. Date: 2/18/2013 3:37:00 AM

    very descriptive and outright...brings out the mood as it is.Great.

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 1:06:00 PM

    Very original and descriptive. I feel like I am there with you. Nice work Elizabeth and thanks for your comment. Love, Vie

    lepapa Avatar elizabeth lepapa Date: 9/1/2011 8:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Vienna for your compliment. Ohh i wish i was there in mombasa during this hot weather,even the fishes couldnt catch me in a swimming competition.And your welcome cause your poetry are lovely