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A PEEK INSIDE

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A PEEK INSIDE

I stand in awe; when newborns are Settled into warm cozy beds ~ Living and breathing in our world ~ Time to time turned, shaping soft heads. I feel; full to overflowing With love that bursts forth in my soul ~ For the innocence of new life ~ One great gift God chose to extol. I wonder; if this small person Will someday be all they can be ~ Or maybe stray from goodness that ~ Anchors honor and decency. I understand; motivation And the freedom to make a choice ~ Hinges on strength of character ~ And how high one lifts one’s small voice. I believe; The Lord God knew all Before you filled your lungs with air ~ Like ev’ry amazing new life ~ The Almighty chooses to share. Caryl Ramsdale Copyright © 2011 All rights reserved. Rhyme Poetry Form August 20, 2011 “Choose your theme“ by Paula Swanson 1st Place 8/25/2011

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  1. Date: 9/18/2011 1:26:00 AM
    great rhyme about the tiny, little old people seem to me, facination, sometimes, grimy, humans grow the family tree...great poem babe...

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 12:19:00 PM
    Dear fellow poet: Taking a time out while I organize my collection of poetry forms. Be back soon! CR

  1. Date: 9/3/2011 4:48:00 AM
    Babies are like little old people who are ever changing, bit of an enigma, well done here babe!

  1. Date: 8/27/2011 5:32:00 PM
    Children are such gifts! Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/27/2011 4:40:00 AM
    CONGRATULATIONS for the first place win~~~smile*_*junjun

  1. Date: 8/27/2011 3:22:00 AM
    hey caryl many congrats on your super win David

  1. Date: 8/26/2011 9:49:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win . This was a beautiful work to read. thank you for sharing. Margaret

  1. Date: 8/26/2011 7:15:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Paula Swanson's "Choose your theme" contest Caryl. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/26/2011 6:22:00 AM
    Excellent, Caryl. Congratulations on placing at the top! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/26/2011 4:06:00 AM
    Congrats on your 1st place. Best wishes Em :)

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 10:57:00 PM
    Indeed....a wonderful subject to choose! Happily joyful, and filled with love!!

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 10:47:00 PM
    Fantastic write! Congratulations for this well deserved win! Just wonderful in every way, leaves a imprint! Smiles from Cyndi

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 10:40:00 PM
    I'm glad to see you at the top of the list so I could read this poem as I review the winners . Congrats on your awesome win. YOu chose and excellent topic!

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 7:36:00 PM
    Congrats Caryl on your well deserved first place win luv.. wonderful write ..enjoy..

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 1:37:00 PM
    I believe that too my friend. He gives us everything we're born with. The color of our eyes, hair, skin, our parents and the country of our birth. What we do with it and what we choose to become because of it is our gift back to Him. God Bless, JB

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 8/23/2011 8:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are so right Judy...Think I'll shorten my signature to CR. hahaha There's another Caryl on here so I try to limit everyone's confusion by typing Caryl Ramsdale. It's unusual to run across anyone with that spelling. Only found 2 my whole lifelong. CR
  1. Date: 8/20/2011 8:14:00 PM
    Wonderful write dear poet mate, so much truth and everyone indeed has to choose...thanks for this wonderful write...with love...old Jack

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 8/23/2011 8:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jack! Caryl Ramsdale
  1. Date: 8/20/2011 3:58:00 PM
    Caryl, I'm by no means religious. But my life presently is drawing me into the abyss of darkened souls. This wonderful piece, has not only made me cry, it relays anew and hope. Thank you for penning this beauty. Good luck in Paula's new contest, James xx

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 8/20/2011 4:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    James: Thank you for this heartfelt comment. I've missed reading some of your works recently. Sorry my friend. I've been offline mostly working on my series poem collection. Think of you often. Peace, Caryl