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  1. Date: 1/23/2015 10:10:00 PM
    Clever!!! I absolutely love it, crap and all! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 9/7/2014 4:57:00 PM
    Heheheheh! This one had me in stitches! But this witty write has such a more profound deeper message! Well done! Pandita

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 2:27:00 PM
    i like your thinking! sometimes you step in it and sometimes you don't kind of thing

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 9:33:00 PM
    tee hee, the 1, 2, 3, part of this had me rolling! Finally a soup mail!

  1. Date: 12/19/2011 5:39:00 PM
    I love the moral you penned very well said. bravo!

  1. Date: 12/16/2011 9:59:00 AM
    An evil fate to stay and wait; I will remember what your last lines are and try to see things that way. Hi Dave, Hope you have a wonderful Christmas. Lizzie

  1. Date: 12/10/2011 4:42:00 PM
    The moral of the story beats anything I've heard lately. Do wish that poor little bird had survived though. Always great to visit David, even if I read more than once. Take care - Lizzie

  1. Date: 12/9/2011 12:12:00 PM
    SMILE........... to you David Hug from Norway and Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 9/29/2011 2:27:00 PM
    Hahaha :) This sure would give Mr. Aesop a run for his money, David :) Enjoyed this one-- just dropping by to say hi and hoping that all is well with you :D --nikko :)

  1. Date: 8/22/2011 8:09:00 PM
    Hahahahahaha. :-)

  1. Date: 8/21/2011 6:47:00 PM
    a procrastinating bird is a wonderful center for this crappy day David.. luv the morals at the end ..that third one is debatable ..hard to keep mouth shut sometimes..haha.. excellent .. very creative and philosophical too..luv..thankxx for anniversary greeting.. we are on vacation celebrating in Florida for two weeks.. oh the joy of heat all the way fun..luv..

  1. Date: 8/20/2011 10:40:00 AM
    Davie boy, this started out so seriously and ended up with me in stitches. I love the morals at the end, but maay take issue with the first on! Love, Lizzie