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HOT LOVING

At dawn when yo blazed my heart to boil,
love shrived up our hearts like leaves blown to fall on each other,
like adjourned twins glued to quiver for each other,
we burn love sacrifice in our paradise garden 

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  1. Date: 8/19/2011 8:37:00 AM

    Couple of typos in there, nicely written without overstepping the mark. Well done.

    lepapa Avatar elizabeth lepapa Date: 8/19/2011 2:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I appreciate your comment nick. Hope you keep reading as your encouragement and correction drive me.love