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Sadly Chronic Pain

Pretty
Sadly
Needy
Pushy

Limping slowly pretty sadly shy
Anger rises needy pushy pain.

Contest: tyburn sponsored by Dr. Ram

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  1. Date: 9/10/2011 10:02:00 AM

    very clever piece of poetry x

  1. Date: 8/26/2011 4:43:00 PM

    Many congrats on your wins, Doris : )

  1. Date: 8/26/2011 8:15:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tyburn" contest Doris. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 11:06:00 PM

    Congrats Doris on your winning poem in Tyburn contest.. luv your word choices ..hope u guys are all safe with hurricane coming..

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 10:15:00 PM

    Nice idea Doris,Quite neat, a worthy poem. Congratulations on your worthy poem's win. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 6:15:00 PM

    Congratulations on the win in my contest,Doris

  1. Date: 8/19/2011 7:18:00 PM

    yes dealing with pain is a pain Doris.. luv your choice of words for the contest..good luck luv..

  1. Date: 8/19/2011 4:15:00 PM

    A great entry for Dr. Ram's contest Doris, the best of luck to you ;) enjoy the weekend ahead!! Wilma

  1. Date: 8/18/2011 9:17:00 PM

    very creative Tyburn, enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on Harrison's Five and Dime.

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 8:26:00 PM

    Thanks for the entry, Doris

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 6:02:00 PM

    Very good tyburn, Doris. People who have chronic pain will surely relate to this one. Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, carolyn

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 2:58:00 PM

    One word says it all.So simple.

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley Date: 8/17/2011 5:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol..Now I understand what you were doing.