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FIGHTER

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FIGHTER

             
             It has no 
color 
             No flavor 
             Without favor 
              Don t try 
being sanctimonious 
              Just grow 
and achieve like birds 
              So 
insurmountable  
              So unrivaled  
              Yet, belittle 
               Bringing 
joys      
               Bringing 
nightmares 
               Yet, you 
also bring pains 
               Distorting 
the novice 
               Priceless 
with huge prices 
               Land of 
imaginations            
               Land of 
remarkable joys 
               Where the 
situation keeps 
changing rapidly 
                You give a 
pain of painful loss 
                A god-
forsaken pain 
                So 
indecipherable

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  1. Date: 8/14/2011 1:40:00 PM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Safiyya. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 8/13/2011 9:06:00 PM
    Nice personification well penned, safiyyah

  1. Date: 8/13/2011 10:53:00 AM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write.. enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share words with luv..

  1. Date: 8/13/2011 8:05:00 AM
    I like the line "Priceless with huge prices"