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FIGHTER

             
             It has no color 
             No flavor 
             Without favor 
              Don t try being sanctimonious 
              Just grow and achieve like birds 
              So insurmountable  
              So unrivaled  
              Yet, belittle 
               Bringing joys      
               Bringing nightmares 
               Yet, you also bring pains 
               Distorting the novice 
               Priceless with huge prices 
               Land of imaginations            
               Land of remarkable joys 
               Where the situation keeps changing rapidly 
                You give a pain of painful loss 
                A god-forsaken pain 
                So indecipherable
                

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  1. Date: 8/14/2011 1:40:00 PM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Safiyya. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 8/13/2011 9:06:00 PM

    Nice personification well penned, safiyyah

  1. Date: 8/13/2011 10:53:00 AM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write.. enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share words with luv..

  1. Date: 8/13/2011 8:05:00 AM

    I like the line "Priceless with huge prices"