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Debts Paid

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Debts Paid

Pieced together thin slices
like a slivered moon
mosaic
cobbled snapshots of splendor and pain

Fractured glints of crashed boundaries
uncollected past dues
mingled souls’ shredded fabric
a patchwork insane

shimmered moonglow does knock on
your window each night
poke your nose through the fog
and unlock the safety chain

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  1. Date: 3/29/2011 3:52:00 AM
    Hi Jill, How I remember your excitement when this sensational poem won fifth place in the Poetrysoup competition. God! How I miss those days. Hope life is treating you well. Lainie

  1. Date: 3/28/2011 6:26:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Jill. Miss you here at the Soup. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/27/2011 6:33:00 PM
    Debts Paid being featured this week, Congratulations, Jill

  1. Date: 5/30/2009 5:49:00 AM
    Hey girlfriend, I miss you. Hope all is well with you. I miss your profound talent as illistrated in this masterpiece. yf4l, lainie

  1. Date: 5/30/2009 2:07:00 AM
    Nicely written. Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week. Kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.

  1. Date: 5/26/2009 10:00:00 AM
    Congrats once again as you are being honoured once again with another feature of the week. We can’t get this kind of well deserved honour else where other than poetrysoup. Keep writing, you are a great poet… Leke

  1. Date: 5/26/2009 3:46:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/25/2009 2:04:00 AM
    Congratulations on your wonderful and beautiful poem featured this week. Ernilando

  1. Date: 5/24/2009 7:20:00 PM
    Dear Jill,Congratulations on YOUR Featured POEM "Debts Paid" YOUR diction clear and Vivid I've missed YOU LOVE ALWAYS...HG

  1. Date: 5/24/2009 4:39:00 PM
    Good use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen