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Missing


An empty pillow
she awakens to absence
one of many days
never to feel his warm touch
a kiss shared only in dreams...

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  1. Date: 12/1/2011 9:54:00 PM

    I really like this. Two great tanka in a row!!

  1. Date: 11/30/2011 3:18:00 PM

    Lonely when you have no one to share a pillow or a kiss with. Missing that special warmth. Great poem Shar. love phyl

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 3:43:00 PM

    Enjoyed this write Sharon, (how are you..?

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 7:21:00 AM

    A lonely place to be is beside an empty pillow. Especially that of a lost loved one Sharon. Tender writing indeed, and so touching :)

  1. Date: 8/21/2011 6:54:00 PM

    "to sleep - perchance to dream - ay there's the rub." Your poems evokes the Bards words. Peace and Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 8/11/2011 7:13:00 PM

    Lovely feelings of loss expressed well, Sharon