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Shopping is a riot

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Shopping is a riot

Broke the door
Gotta Iphone4
A TV
Dvd
Laptop 
I can't stop
Popped back in the shop
Ooh! ooh! another Iphone
Gotta go home 
Cant carry any more
Me arms are gettin’ sore
But I think I can manage two more
So back into the store
For me 8month olds son a fluffy toy
And me 8year old a game boy
I think I will call it a day 
Gotta home quick a and sell them on ebay.

*Bloody riots in London. When all the smoke settles who pays for it we do, the tax payer Bollocks.

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  1. Date: 9/15/2011 4:53:00 PM
    Need a new poem my friend!!

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 7:29:00 AM
    yep stinks!! Are things better now??

  1. Date: 8/16/2011 7:59:00 AM
    Hey there Sidney did you get anything sold on ebay?? just kidding.. Quite a fitting piece for the turmoil in London last week.. Hope you are doing okay.. love W

  1. Date: 8/15/2011 2:29:00 AM
    so agreed,..p.d.

  1. Date: 8/12/2011 5:52:00 PM
    Hi Sid, a timely poem on a very emotive subject…well written Jo Davis

  1. Date: 8/11/2011 11:48:00 AM
    Hi Sid, a great verse on the gotta have syndrome. P.S Why don't the shoot the rioters? Some lessons need to be taught the hard way.

  1. Date: 8/9/2011 10:54:00 PM
    Clever write Sidney.... great subject matter as well..... nicely penned!!!!!!!