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True blue

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True blue

When your feeling at your worst,
feeling helpless and alone,
in one second you'll just burst,
all your sences thrown,

one thing after another goes wrong,
nothing to look forward too,
the days feel oh so long,
lifes unfair, boy, that saying's true,

will there ever be some sun to shine,?
through darkness and despair,
will there ever be a rythem fine,?
and happiness to share,

It may all be about support,
and whose surronding you,
with those whome you choose to consort,
make sure intensions true,

The devil, he surrounds us,
testing all the time,
be careful and for him don't trust,
he'll spear you every time,


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  1. Date: 8/7/2011 9:08:00 PM
    Nice write I enjoyed this.