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A Bullet and Justice

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A Bullet and Justice

Scattered blood drops have scrawled
A modern picture on the toilet walls.
Her virginity and life bird have been
Smothered in the beastly clutches.

''Charm of that dimple smile,
O daughter, no drug can tranquilize me.’’
As the pyre burns on,
A gloomy father leans on the broken dreams.

Innocent justice gets
Brutally raped in court.
A lawyer’s tongue wrenches the head
Of justice to acquit that human shape.

The father in dismay fires at that cruel chest,
And evil blood flows into death.
Shackles lock his wrists, but
Justice sits on the bullet as on a throne.

FABIYAS M V

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  1. Date: 11/16/2011 8:58:00 AM
    really shattering.....you are gem of a writer ......Fabiyas.........

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 11:04:00 AM
    Capitalize the First and Last Words of Titles & Every Word Between Except Articles & Short, Unimportant Words Do this for titles of books, poems, stories, movies, paintings, and magazines. When the above rule says not to capitalize articles, it's referring to a specific kind of adjective called an article. The articles are a, an, and the. ex""I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud" (poem)

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    Date: 11/11/2011 10:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Debbie for close reading.Sometimes I deviate from the fundamental rules to be free.I think your suggestions are good and worth keeping in mind.
  1. Date: 9/29/2011 12:13:00 PM
    Powerful write-congrats. on your win in my contest :)

  1. Date: 9/29/2011 7:39:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in this contest Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/29/2011 6:03:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win in the contest of Natalie, Fabiyas

  1. Date: 9/29/2011 12:42:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win, Fabiyas!

  1. Date: 9/28/2011 10:46:00 PM
    Congrats Fabiyas on another excellent win with these outstanding words reflecting contest theme so perfectly my friend..luv..

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 10:18:00 AM
    Can't compliment you enough on this fabulous write!

  1. Date: 9/4/2011 9:54:00 AM
    This is a great writing, Fabiyas. A lil bit dark as I like it.

  1. Date: 8/26/2011 4:49:00 PM
    This is a very interesting work..I am not sure exactly how to interpert it..I feel that it is more than just preverted justice but a specific case where there is child abuse or molestation..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/20/2011 1:22:00 PM
    A nice poem that exposes the judiciary and shows how cruel the Law of Evidence can be. Some unscrupulous lawyers make sure that justice is not done by the Courts. I have a personal experience of Courts. My legitimate suit has been dragging feet in a Karachi High Court for over five years. Thanks also for your kind comments on my poem End of the Tunnel. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 8/9/2011 5:31:00 PM
    wonderful words depicting the injustice of the justice system FABIYAS... this happens so much .. so unfair.. yet taking justice into one's own hands is deadly too.. emphatically clear and concise luv.. that powerful last verse..wow..

  1. Date: 8/5/2011 12:04:00 PM
    Thank you..very visual-thought provoking piece!