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A puzzled butterfly

A butterfly with rainbow touch fluttering wings delicate much, there in my garden. All the flowers asking to sit spreading fragrance seducing it, whom to entertain? ================000================

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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 10:56:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Kash. Love Carol

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 5:47:00 AM

    A lovely tail rhyme here, great use of imagination and very witty. Congrats on the win!

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 11:42:00 PM

    Beautiful write Kash! Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 11:33:00 PM

    Really nice Kash. Poor butterfly. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 4:56:00 PM

    Kash,, a nice little win... good poem..PD

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 2:14:00 PM

    My favorite Kash, Congrats on your well deserved win in Susan’s contest!

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 1:25:00 PM

    Another stunner Kash , Congratulations on your win xx

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 11:53:00 AM

    FANTASTIC. Insight......... Congrats. Ellie Daphne

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 11:02:00 AM

    congrads on your win Dada...maja ma??

    Shah Avatar Yesha Shah Date: 12/5/2012 5:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 12/4/2012 10:53:00 AM

    Love your first place win.

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 9:05:00 AM

    congrats Kash on a fabulous first place win luv .. awesome creation .. luv sharing with u too..

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 9:01:00 AM

    congrats on your win Kash

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 8:47:00 AM

    Congratulations, Kash. It was so sweet!! Jag

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 8:18:00 AM

    delicate and lovely-- image on the bottom of the page a nice touch

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:37:00 AM

    Congratulations on 1st placement.

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:30:00 AM

    Amazing scene and dialogue in this winning tail rhyme, Kash...a hearty congrats!! gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:18:00 AM

    me first lol! excellent write. I like it :) Big Congratulations on your grand win friend Kash. cheers!! hugsss, Maria

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 12:53:00 PM

    This put me in mind of you with all the attention you get here from all the ladies. Great poem Kash. Huggs TLee

  1. Date: 11/24/2011 6:30:00 PM

    I picture the flowers turning their faces, vying for attention. I enjoyed this beauty. Congratulations Kash...Margaret

  1. Date: 11/23/2011 12:45:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in this contest today Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/23/2011 9:26:00 AM

    Congratulations on your HM Kash

  1. Date: 8/12/2011 12:23:00 AM

    this is so simple, and so very, very good. I enjoyed tremendously. Just goes to show what a short poem can do, if done right. I know it will do well in the contest.

  1. Date: 8/11/2011 10:03:00 PM

    This is very cleverly done and shows much thought. Great job. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 8/9/2011 2:04:00 PM

    Whom to entertain! Wow, this is great stuff! Congrats on this most special poem about my favorite insect of all. Great scene and very dramatic! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 8/8/2011 4:27:00 PM

    Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tail Rhyme" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/8/2011 6:36:00 AM

    This is cute write Kash and I see you won in the contest as well.. Congratulations to you :)

  1. Date: 8/7/2011 6:59:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/7/2011 6:41:00 PM

    thoughts n flow n woebetow, chuckles are the thing, a catching nought as on i go, me sprang has sprung from spring. y/no:) well done here mate, Don

  1. Date: 8/7/2011 5:22:00 PM

    What a creative idea! i love the idea of flowers seducing the butterfly. congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 8/7/2011 10:57:00 AM

    Quick congrats before I get logged out again!

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