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IN MY NIGHTS

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Below is the poem entitled IN MY NIGHTS which was written by poet Amit Valmiki. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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IN MY NIGHTS

Some things are there that wakes me as I sleep,
They are the dreams of mine aroused in my nights.

The day today and those were passed yesterday were timeless,
But clusters of their memories fill my mind in my nights.

Now the voice of revelation sounds in the thoughts,
That surprised me giving an intangible world in my nights.

And a day when I sights my heart-crush,
A feeling of loneliness appears very inane in my nights.

Next day thought which make me humane clicked to me, 
When I thought I am not considerate in my nights
 

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  1. Date: 11/3/2011 10:58:00 AM

    i forgot to rate your work.

  1. Date: 11/3/2011 10:56:00 AM

    very good work, congo! but there are few mistakes which i want to point out- And a day when I sights{sight} my heart-crush, i think there should be mind rather than nights in l2. l3 is very very thought provoking.

    Valmiki Avatar Amit Valmiki Date: 11/3/2011 9:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks pummy sir,for your comments and view......thanks for making some changes and showing me mistakes for improvement of poem...thank you..
  1. Date: 9/7/2011 7:53:00 PM

    nicely done