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His Apocalypse Come True

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His Apocalypse Come True

It started with one utterance that grew into a shout. That cry grew louder in his ear. He could not get it out. The bellowing prolonged itself, and then one cry was two. His frightened eyes searched faces on the teeming avenue. Amidst the bustling multitude, he gaped at strangers’ lips, but mouths stayed shut and mocked the truth of his apocalypse. The cries that he was hearing came a hundredfold or more, a deafening cacophony, an oceanic roar. And nightmare revelations that had brought this din in dreams were now his actuality - enwrapping him in screams. The throng pressed on around a man who crouched, with eyes half-dead. And now inside a room he rocks to screams inside his head.
Fpr the Impress Me II Contest of Giorgio Veneto

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  1. Date: 8/5/2013 6:15:00 PM
    congratulations, dearest.... Great writing... All I can say is... It's hard to break those bad habits sometime..... Love ya...Jake

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 9:36:00 AM
    thank GOD no such nightmare so far. I really scare for revelations.Andrea great poem. Can impress even this way. great!. Congrats for an excellent win. (:c Jenish

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 9:07:00 AM
    Congratulations Petal, Great poem, reminds me of 'Pyscho' ahem. Surprising where a single thought can tak you if you lose control of it. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 5:01:00 AM
    An outstanding piece which really deserved its super win! CONGRATULATIONS my dear friend, Andrea! And since somebody sent me a message, i'm passing it to you, Happy Friendship Day! Big sweet hugs! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 4:53:00 AM
    Congrats on your win. The poem is technically superb and reflects something that may happen to a person. Maybe we'll talk about it someday. G.

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 1:40:00 AM
    Once again you have shown another side of you...Mersmerizing and terrifying piece of work...Congrats my friend - Tim

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 12:46:00 AM
    Congratulations Andrea Very descriptive of a nervous breakdown Way to go....SuZ

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 11:36:00 PM
    Congs Andrea...' Love Bryan De Poet'.... I enjoy the theme

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 10:00:00 PM
    Congratulations, nice winning list... goodnight~ Linda

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 5:01:00 PM
    impressive nice hit.... SKAT

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 2:26:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 12:44:00 PM
    - Nice to read this poem, it deserved a first place Andrea! - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 7:54:00 AM
    well penned Andrea...congrats on your win

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 7:48:00 AM
    A sad tale masterfully conveyed. Congratulations on your top placement in Giorgio's contest. Well done, my friend. You've got the rhyming gift. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 6:17:00 AM
    most enjoyable a worthy winner congrats Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 8/1/2013 8:42:00 AM
    Bravo. Excellent verse. G.

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 10:21:00 AM
    congrats Andrea on a wonderful win for this great contest.. u put a smile on Nate's face luv.. kudos.. having computer woes past two days oh..

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 6:51:00 AM
    Wow Andrea, I love this poem! Incredible words in rhyme. A big congratulations to you! :)

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 4:29:00 PM
    Hey darlin...way to go!...you had such depth of despair in this psychotic thriller...congrats. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 1:46:00 PM
    well deserved win. Mike

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