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Feeling pain

Can you feel it,
can you say,
Do want to run away.

Yes it's love and care,
you wish he'd share,
but as you see ,
the monster is he,

Does it help to cry,
Do you feel it best to die,
Maybe now you do,
but someone does love you.

Pick up the phone, 
and exit that scary zone,
it's not fair to say, 
Life should leave you,
feeling this way.

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  1. Date: 12/31/2011 8:25:00 PM

    Enjoyed your work so much Chantelle happy new year , best wishes Declan xxx

  1. Date: 8/11/2011 7:58:00 AM

    Today I have stopped back to read more of your excellent poetry Chantelle. I will be back again soon and hope to see some more poetry written here by you. If you feel it in your heart then write it as that is where the best poetry comes from. Love, Carol