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  1. Date: 8/19/2013 12:36:00 AM
    LOL! Did you guys read the minds of baby boomers including me?? The essence of the poem is so true!! I really love these kinds of light poetry...mirroring everyday life!! Thanks for making me smile. Love Dalila

  1. Date: 12/30/2011 2:25:00 PM
    added in the notes already...hehe this was the one we're entering right?! :D

  1. Date: 8/7/2011 6:35:00 PM
    I like that angle my friend and yes I will remind you in the future... take care my friend...

  1. Date: 8/7/2011 6:23:00 PM
    You got it Chris... Whenever your ready, no rush... And this is another fine write by the 2 of you... The 2 Hottie sisters chatted all over my poem too, and you know I love it...lol... Wifey is cool with the colab as long as my head is on the pillow next to her every night..lol... Have a god night Chris and nice chatting.... we should chat on one of there poems one day lol

  1. Date: 8/5/2011 8:06:00 PM
    no the jolly buggered felling , aint it awful so appealuing (typo) no officer i aint squealing ...no more:) well done guys....Don

  1. Date: 8/5/2011 1:45:00 AM
    haha! lol.. p.d. was here....-= ...-=...-=....-=....-=...-=

  1. Date: 8/5/2011 12:31:00 AM
    lol.. p.d. was here....-= ...-=...-=....-=....-=...-=

  1. Date: 8/5/2011 12:30:00 AM
    Nikko, I am glad that you double-posted this poem, because this way it will actually receive more views and comments lol. I think only people who feel sorry for me, end up leaving comments for me haha! Wot kind of silly poem is this anyway? :D

  1. Date: 8/2/2011 1:25:00 AM
    I saw this at Nikko's and thought it was terribly clever, Chris. You guys are so good at collaborating. You need to do it more often!

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    Date: 8/5/2011 12:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Nikko, I am glad that you double-posted this poem, because this way it will actually receive more views and comments lol. I think only people who feel sorry for me, end up leaving comments for me haha! Wot kind of silly poem is this anyway? :D
  1. Date: 8/1/2011 4:45:00 AM
    Amazingly true and wonderful. You painted the sketch of every serious internet user. The only thing which may differ is the consumption of chock late as some may enjoy and some may not. Both of you have done a nice job in making out this funny realistic picture. Thanks for your kind comments on my Poem. Love and best wishes...Ravindra....Chris D Aechtner

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    Date: 8/5/2011 12:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Nikko, I am glad that you double-posted this poem, because this way it will actually receive more views and comments lol. I think only people who feel sorry for me, end up leaving comments for me haha! Wot kind of silly poem is this anyway? :D
  1. Date: 7/31/2011 4:34:00 PM
    well you really DO need the right chair and to get out of it once in awhile! LOL GOOD job Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/31/2011 12:06:00 PM
    I always figured chocolate as a reward of some kind, like, booze rewards the worker for a particularly crappy day - so, chocolate. I taught school for 30 years. You can imagine how much booze and chocolate I consumed. At one time - actually two times - I weighed nearly 300 pounds. This was before the day of the internet, at least for me. With this heat, I don't need chocolate to stick to the computer seat. Love, daver.

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    Date: 7/31/2011 12:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oops! Forgot. I really enjoyed this read. daver
  1. Date: 7/30/2011 4:05:00 PM
    Ok, I figure I could earn an extra million or two before I call it a night-- here's another comment! Haha! But I sure am glad that you think you are getting your money's worth, lol!! This is crazy-- at the rate we're going, we're the only ones who would be commenting at each other's poems? How sad is that???? lol--oh boohoo-- why don't you post this collab on a blog?? haha kidding O_o

  1. Date: 7/30/2011 3:47:00 PM
    oh puhleease-- don't be too hard on yourself--- I don't feel sorry for you At ALL and yet I visit your poems for the simple fact that I enjoy your poetry and think that you are really a brilliant poet (kaching kaching that will be a million bucks--kidding!) -- seriously, You do write awesome poetry and I know you know it, just too bad for those who don't read them, they sure are missing out. & what kind of silly poem this is? The nutty & butty kind! Haha! & see you have a comment from Carolyn

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    Date: 7/30/2011 3:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oh btw, Wilma's connection zonked out but she read this poem so she can't comment at the Soup now, see-- it's soo wonderful I even get to relay comments-- she says to pass it on that she digs this poem BIG time and that we did an awesome job - Haha :D the haha was from me :)
  1. Date: 7/30/2011 3:19:00 PM
    LOL Chris, you and Nikko wrote a very funny poem together. My back, muscles and eyes get sore staring at the screen too. Maybe we all need to get out more! There is more to life than the internet. As for the chocolate, from what I hear Nikko makes great candy! Not sure who wrote which lines, but it's a terrrific collaboration. Love, Carolyn

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    Date: 7/30/2011 3:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm heehee, umm 'butting' in here and saying Thank you very much, Carolyn :) Glad you enjoyed it! and yup, heehee I believe you heard that from me, haha! Seriously, not being too smug or anything, but I think the chocolate truffles I make are pretty good ;p
  1. Date: 7/30/2011 3:13:00 PM
    Haha! Oh I Love that you added that *click* in the end! & haha my name is all in small letters, thanks ;) -- Well I sure enjoyed writing for this one! Thanks for your comments :D & wowsers, you actually like my forlorn writes better? That's a revelation-- I guess I have gotten into emotive zone lately? Now why do I suddenly feel so intimidated by that deeper collab? Haha! & ok, I will be posting this on my end ;)