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Striking colored lights dazzle Her dynamic dance routines— Wearing stagehands to a frazzle Illuminating live scenes Spotlighting three tambourines. Her shimmering white tights cast Opalescence unforeseen Climaxing one last bright blast. Caryl Ramsdale Copyright © 2011 All rights reserved. Verse Poetry Form July 29, 2011 "HUTAIN THIS ONE..." poetry contest sponsored by nette onclaud ~ 1st Place ~ 08/03/2011

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  1. Date: 9/20/2011 12:54:00 AM
    hmmm, maybe I have read all your poems by now. Did you take some of them down or did you never have many up? I sure hope to see many more, CAryl.

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/20/2011 10:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Andrea, Since my first appearance on PoetrySoup in 2006 I have had a habit of removing my posted poems annually and beginning anew by the first of every year. I'm taking down and organizing my collection of written works again this year as usual. Thanks for reading, commenting and asking my friend. Have a wonderful day. CR
  1. Date: 9/17/2011 10:15:00 AM
    It's a nice poem,Caryl.I think this poem has won contest.Congratulations though belated!

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/20/2011 10:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Fabiyas, Thanks for stopping by to read and comment. CR
  1. Date: 9/13/2011 12:17:00 PM
    Dear fellow poet: Taking a time out while I organize my collection of poetry forms. Be back soon! CR

  1. Date: 8/4/2011 8:06:00 PM
    Excellent poem. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Lee

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/20/2011 10:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Lee. Have another creative day filled with blessings my friend. CR
  1. Date: 8/4/2011 1:25:00 PM
    Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of nette, Caryl

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/20/2011 11:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you again for leaving behind a comment my friend. Much appreciated. CR
  1. Date: 8/4/2011 11:49:00 AM
    congratulations on your 1st place win! you paint an exciting dance scene :)

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/20/2011 11:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Susan. Have a great day. CR
  1. Date: 8/4/2011 11:35:00 AM
    Wow, so many contest results again! Many congrats for all your wins : )

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/20/2011 11:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Jack, Your remarks are always appreciated. CR
  1. Date: 8/4/2011 9:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Nette's "Hutain" contest Caryl. Love, Carol

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 9/20/2011 11:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks my friend. I appreciate your comments. CR
  1. Date: 8/4/2011 2:14:00 AM
    An apt description of the picture made lovely by your words. Many congrats for this win Caryl

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 8/4/2011 2:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you much! Caryl
  1. Date: 8/3/2011 11:24:00 PM
    I KNEW this one would score big! Congratulations.

    Ramsdale Avatar Caryl Ramsdale
    Date: 8/4/2011 2:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You were right...but I didn't expect it. I was totally surprised. I guess I'm not a very good judge of my own works. Thanks for the kind comments. Caryl
  1. Date: 8/3/2011 8:00:00 PM
    Congrad's on this romp of a win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 7:59:00 PM
    Congrad's on this romp of a win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 6:45:00 PM
    Caryl, congrats on your 1st place win with this verse. Enjoyed the read. Love Glenna

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 6:38:00 PM
    congrats on a superb 1st place write, very colourful and vivid...

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 6:05:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win Caryl....luv it...!!!!!

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 3:59:00 PM
    What ah original take of the photo ! Just wonderful. Congratulations on your well deserved big win, dear Caryl!

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 2:48:00 PM
    Congrats Caryl on your first place win with this prolific poetry luv..

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 2:06:00 PM
    What a unique theme for your poem....outstanding work, and orginal subject matter!! Congratulations!!! ps...and thank you for your very kind comments, ...they always mean more to me than than I can ever say! :)

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 1:23:00 PM
    Original poetry Caryl. Enjoyed reading your poetry today. Love, Vie.

  1. Date: 8/2/2011 1:03:00 AM
    What a sparkling bedecked superstar she is! It's sure to please the eye of Nette!

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