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First Love

When i first saw her time froze
I tried talking to her with my eyes closed
My voice stumbled out of my lips
My legs got weak I couldn´t feel my hips
I was sweating cold and my hands were slippery
So I ran away and let it be a mystery.

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  1. Date: 7/29/2011 6:25:00 PM

    there is a quality of innocence about this piece that i like. could have been a bit longer, but still very good poetry. top write.