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I'll be something better this time

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I'll be something better this time

You used to help me in the beginning
we would study about prayer
but then that all got pushed aside
The love we had for each other was there
and we forgot everything else
That's the relationship I'm working on now
because I would smile and pretend
and push my inner most feelings aside
My conscience was dead
and my soul and joys were going with it
I still long to feel how I used to 
from that spiritual high
I know us together will be just fine
we worked I know that
everything around us now 
just needs to fall into place

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  1. Date: 7/29/2011 8:49:00 AM
    Excellent write Corinne. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/29/2011 12:13:00 AM
    beautiful expression