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Sweet Longing

She comes everyday at dusk,
When the Sun's about to melt
Down in his aerie nest.
She comes and greets me
With flowers in her hands
And a smile on her pretty face...

She touches me with her warmth--
The blushing of her rosy cheek--
She talks her heart's deepest to me
And often laughs with joy...
I laugh with her--Cry with her,
Then try to wipe her tears:
I'm left with the longing to hold her hand,
When she kisses me goodbye,
And bidding farewell,
Walks away from the grave where I lie.....

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  1. Date: 8/22/2011 9:44:00 PM

    You are very good yourself and your poem strikes a cord with this person. Thank you for your kind comments. God is awesome and we all on the soup do know that. God bless

  1. Date: 7/28/2011 5:15:00 PM

    excellent poetry, deep in emotion, evokes images of a great love. top write.

  1. Date: 7/28/2011 4:08:00 PM

    Wonderful creative writing today Akash. I will be back soon to read more if the gremlins in PoetrySoup will permit. Love, Carol