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Driftwood

driftwood...
it conjures up a romantic journey of flotsam from far away
fragments perhaps from a tumble down shack on an island paradise
or disturbed from a sunken wreck exposed by shifting sands
timbers stolen from natures shelter by Neptune’s icy fingers
and spirited away on a lightning struck night
drifting day by day fading under a harsh naked sun
splintered and infested by creatures finding refuge
it has been long and hard from windswept tropics
to be tossed broken upon our pebbled shoreline
rescued from the cold crashing, crushing foam
leaving fragments to be gathered on the ebbing tide
fashioned and wall hung in a patchouli scented room

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  1. Date: 7/28/2011 2:36:00 PM

    Wonderful creative writing today Peter. I will be back soon to read more if the gremlins in PoetrySoup will permit. Love, Carol

    Churchley Avatar Peter Churchley Date: 7/29/2011 12:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ahh the trials of running a website... thank you Carol
  1. Date: 7/27/2011 7:10:00 PM

    Excellent write, great imagination...I do love driftwood and shells....God bless...Old Jack

    Churchley Avatar Peter Churchley Date: 7/29/2011 12:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Jack, very much appreciate you taking the time to leave a comment... Not so young Peter
  1. Date: 7/27/2011 6:02:00 PM

    love the subject matter, good poetry. i like this a lot, no sea or island paradise in sheffield.

    Churchley Avatar Peter Churchley Date: 7/29/2011 11:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Steven... plenty of sea and islands on the south coast.