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The earth speaks to the Moon and Sun

Shine
Moon and
carve a path
illuminate
for me my earthly journey’s destiny
for when your sister Sun awakes once more
she’ll warm my back
from sunrise 
till she
sleeps


 AgMoore© 07/2011

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  1. Knop Avatar
    Gert W. Knop
    Date: 12/27/2011 3:28:00 AM
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    Lovely write Amanda! Enjoyed the read this morning!
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    Moses Ombuge
    Date: 9/1/2011 5:15:00 AM
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    Lovely and beautiful words, am enjoying every bit.
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    bl devnath
    Date: 8/5/2011 11:08:00 AM
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    Nice write, words are adorned beautifully. Thanks for your comment on my poetry. bl

    Moore Avatar Amanda Moore Date: 8/5/2011 6:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks bl = )
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    ChiquitaChiamaka Baity
    Date: 7/31/2011 10:01:00 PM
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    This is a beautiful tetractys Amanda. I enjoyed reading your poetry today!!!!

    Moore Avatar Amanda Moore Date: 8/2/2011 9:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much Chiquita!
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    Black Eyed Susan
    Date: 7/31/2011 9:04:00 PM
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    beautiful. this has a great flow to it :)

    Moore Avatar Amanda Moore Date: 7/31/2011 9:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Susan glad you liked it!
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 7/28/2011 9:39:00 PM
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    hey Amanda ,this is a nice tetacyts,thanks for stopping by and reading my work...keep writing this creative poetry.

    Moore Avatar Amanda Moore Date: 7/28/2011 11:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Yasmin I am so glad you stopped by!
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 7/28/2011 8:51:00 AM
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    As I am enjoying reading your very creative writing today I would like to thank you for sharing it with us Amanda. Hoping you have a very inspiration filled day with loads of joy and laughter. Love, Carol

    Moore Avatar Amanda Moore Date: 7/28/2011 11:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Carol if I get That lucky I will let you know =)
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    Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 7/28/2011 2:03:00 AM
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    Hey, you did awesome with this form. You really made this double tetractys flow along smoothly. Well done!

    Moore Avatar Amanda Moore Date: 7/28/2011 11:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Chris gracious tetractys is really easy !
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    Jack Ross jr.
    Date: 7/27/2011 4:09:00 PM
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    very lovely verse......Gpd bless.....Old Jack

    Moore Avatar Amanda Moore Date: 7/27/2011 10:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Jack,thank you so much!


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