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The earth speaks to the Moon and Sun

Shine Moon and carve a path illuminate for me my earthly journey’s destiny for when your sister Sun awakes once more she’ll warm my back from sunrise till she sleeps
AgMoore© 07/2011

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  1. Date: 12/27/2011 3:28:00 AM

    Lovely write Amanda! Enjoyed the read this morning!

  1. Date: 9/1/2011 5:15:00 AM

    Lovely and beautiful words, am enjoying every bit.

  1. Date: 8/5/2011 11:08:00 AM

    Nice write, words are adorned beautifully. Thanks for your comment on my poetry. bl

    Moore Avatar Amanda Moore Date: 8/5/2011 6:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks bl = )
  1. Date: 7/31/2011 10:01:00 PM

    This is a beautiful tetractys Amanda. I enjoyed reading your poetry today!!!!

    Moore Avatar Amanda Moore Date: 8/2/2011 9:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much Chiquita!
  1. Date: 7/31/2011 9:04:00 PM

    beautiful. this has a great flow to it :)

    Moore Avatar Amanda Moore Date: 7/31/2011 9:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Susan glad you liked it!
  1. Date: 7/28/2011 9:39:00 PM

    hey Amanda ,this is a nice tetacyts,thanks for stopping by and reading my work...keep writing this creative poetry.

    Moore Avatar Amanda Moore Date: 7/28/2011 11:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Yasmin I am so glad you stopped by!
  1. Date: 7/28/2011 8:51:00 AM

    As I am enjoying reading your very creative writing today I would like to thank you for sharing it with us Amanda. Hoping you have a very inspiration filled day with loads of joy and laughter. Love, Carol

    Moore Avatar Amanda Moore Date: 7/28/2011 11:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Carol if I get That lucky I will let you know =)
  1. Date: 7/28/2011 2:03:00 AM

    Hey, you did awesome with this form. You really made this double tetractys flow along smoothly. Well done!

    Moore Avatar Amanda Moore Date: 7/28/2011 11:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Chris gracious tetractys is really easy !
  1. Date: 7/27/2011 4:09:00 PM

    very lovely verse......Gpd bless.....Old Jack

    Moore Avatar Amanda Moore Date: 7/27/2011 10:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Jack,thank you so much!