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Champagne Is The Savior Of Man

Pregnant sky labors in misty cloud
Tenants of earth awaits the bath of life
Warrant is issued to eastern wind
Stagnant is earth and man's thrive


Rain now patters in Noah's days fashion
Vein shivers as cold infiltrates man
Pain enslave the worried thought and soul
Champagne is the savior of man


For Rick Praise's lento contest

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  1. Date: 7/28/2011 1:37:00 PM

    wine is truly soothing, joseph...some biblical tones here; so impressive with winning wishes! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 7/28/2011 4:53:00 AM

    Dear Joseph, nice name it's my son's name. Lovely poem. Deep. Hope Noah has you safe and warm on his nice boat. Love and Light and God's blessings to you. Vienna

  1. Date: 7/27/2011 10:18:00 PM

    Quite interesting imagery again in this poem, Joseph. Thinking outside the box. Rick is sure to be pleased!

  1. Date: 7/27/2011 9:24:00 PM

    Lovely write in this new form, yes agree it's good if taken in limited quantity, Joseph

  1. Date: 7/27/2011 9:49:00 AM

    The title is paradoxical!. It means that alcohol is of great of help when cold grind man.thank you for reading