From Deep Night

Written by Joseph Osita



                                     From
                                 Deep Night
                               Beneath Owl's
                           Cold weep of ages
            And fireflies assembly of light-tailed ants
        Restless words creep into my slumbering hearts
                       Thought tape message
                                 As it crawls
                                 Ink warms
                                       Up


 For the contest:’ Where your poetry comes  from'
 Sponsore:Michael J Falotico

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Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 8/1/2011 4:04:00 PM congrats on your win in the contest, a very original take on the theme...
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/1/2011 1:51:00 PM Congratulations on your poem placing in Michael J. Falotico's " Where Your Poetry Comes From" contest Joseph. Love, Carol
Caryl Ramsdale Date: 7/31/2011 3:12:00 PM A "Where Your Poetry Comes From" Winner Congratulations! Caryl
Wilma Neels Date: 7/31/2011 8:31:00 AM Love this Joseph, congratulations on your win in Michael's contest ;)
Tim B Date: 7/30/2011 10:27:00 PM I love the line "And fireflies assembly of light-tailed ants", an excellent piece of poetry, congratulations on your win.
Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/30/2011 3:07:00 PM yours was one of the most unique for sure. A big congrats to you!!
yasmin khan Date: 7/30/2011 2:30:00 PM brilliant !congrads on this win,you rightly deserve it.
nette onclaud Date: 7/30/2011 1:32:00 PM truly remarkable, joseph...a round of sparkling cheers for your great win! :)huggs!
kash poet Date: 7/30/2011 1:09:00 PM Wonderful write here Joseph...love it.Congrats on your win.
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Date: 7/30/2011 9:50:00 AM Congrats Joseph on a super sixth place win with this dynamic delight in poetry luv..
jun-jun villanueva Date: 7/30/2011 9:42:00 AM CONGRATULATIONS~~~what a wonderful thoughts~~~smile~~~~well-deserved...-junjun
Michael J. Falotico Date: 7/30/2011 8:53:00 AM Congrats My Poet friend!!!!! always Michael
ChiquitaChiamaka Baity Date: 7/29/2011 9:21:00 PM Beautifully written Joseph!!!!!
Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/27/2011 10:16:00 PM I like how you use imagery from the night creatures for your poem. Good one! Iam a night owl so I really like this.
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/27/2011 1:00:00 PM Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today Joseph. I enjoyed reading it and will be back again soon to read more. Love, Carol

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From Deep Night

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