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My Shattered Tears

My shattered tears cuts at my moment,
still bleeding from my hurt,
searching for the canvas of my tears.

The trampling of my shadow darkens my step, 
Falls from my side curled in a black corner, 
watching from the distance.

I feel my honesty slowing me down,
smiling,
while I walk to my finish. 
My tears are the cheating sequence of
my sweat and my sweat is the 
driven wetness of my honesty.

Where is the pain? 
Why can't I feel you? 
Where have you gone?

Where can I go to dry my tears 
and look for 
the next day?

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  1. Date: 5/21/2013 7:58:00 PM

    amazing poetry.....enjoyed

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 11:18:00 AM

    very good thanks for sharing Maddie

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 7:42:00 AM

    You are very talented and need to keep writing... Try some ting lighter... like a crazy, funn,y story poem. Would love to see the results. Or check out Jack Ellison's poems. A sunny day vacation to read... Your friend... Carol

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 1:17:00 AM

    amazing heartfelt poetry, Sean..

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 5:46:00 AM

    Only God can dry away.our tears.We can believe or not believe but He remains there and never leaves us alone.Your poem once again profound..describes pain so deep..Touched my heart.

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 11:45:00 AM

    Hauntingly beautiful... with deep emotions Well done.

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 7:57:00 PM

    A beautiful poem with a lot of emotion. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 10:21:00 AM

    Sounds like a love break up ,,,,, nice write,,, thank you for reading my " Touch of Skin" ;}

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 9:40:00 AM

    Very moving! Thanks for sharing this special piece.

  1. Date: 1/8/2012 9:10:00 PM

    I feel the raw emotions as I read this. Wonderful poetry.

  1. Date: 10/30/2011 1:59:00 PM

    Oh, what a great write this is. When I read this, I felt heart of you soul.

  1. Date: 10/21/2011 1:18:00 PM

    Very good write, you'll always have a shoulder to cry on, and in the end all the tears you've gone through will be nothing compared to the happiness you soon will get. Keep writing :)

  1. Date: 7/30/2011 7:10:00 AM

    very good poem!

  1. Date: 7/30/2011 7:08:00 AM


  1. Date: 7/29/2011 4:54:00 PM

    Touching write dear poet....a write many, if not all can relate to, one time or another ! Have a wonderful weekend Sean ! Much love, james