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I Lost Something

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I Lost Something

I sit here quiet in my room.
I want to take a bite 
out of life and leave a mark.
But my teeth aren't Sharp
enough for my  appetite.

I want the wet mark left 
on my neck to remind
me someone noticed my 

I want to dance to the 
moonlight's favorite song. 

I want to sing to the 

I want to listen 
while the sun talks to me. 

I want to be brave when 
fear has no excuse.

I want to be your shelter 
when it starts to drizzle.

I want to love you when 
you think no one is there. 

I want to be your pillow 
when your head is heavy.

I want to be your moment 
when you feel my pain.
I want to be!!!!!!!

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  1. Date: 8/19/2013 1:50:00 AM
    This is a beautiful poem Sean - I love it. You've captured the essence of being well- that wish that everything in life just clicked into place. Very well written. I'd also like to thank you for your visit - your words are encouraging. Thank you. Vicky.

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 3:07:00 PM
    When you feel my pain...

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 5:09:00 AM
    - Very good, well done Sean !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/10/2013 12:02:00 PM
    Hope you find that something you lost and be all you can be for that someone..Very emotive..and tnks for reading my simple verse : )

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 1:07:00 AM
    you have such an awesome style with your free verse poetry. Love the imagery.

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 7:57:00 AM
    Such raw emotion and desire. I love the line "someone noticed my footsteps" I think that is a wish of everyone.

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 4:00:00 PM
    Thank you 4 your comment Sean, I have read a few of your pieces.. Some thoughts..' What has been is not ( you ) what is to be is (beyond you) clear your mind and let the poetry flow.' in this you will find that which you seek; the wholeness and the fullfilment.. Good work so far, Joe..'

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 11:43:00 AM
    Awesone, felt every line, just loved how you ended it as well Sean. Talent seep through every line ;)

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 2:51:00 PM
    nicely done,,,, going to favorites ;}

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 10:41:00 AM
    WHOA! This is very beautiful...profound! Annalise

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 8:50:00 PM
    Deep words!

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 1:24:00 PM
    This is the truth!!!

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 5:16:00 AM
    You most definitely are a writer. One love! Keep them coming!

  1. Date: 7/27/2011 8:53:00 AM
    May your inspiration be long lived and your life be filled with many wonderful years of writing and of sharing your excellent poetry. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Sean. Love, Carol