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Hold On

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Hold On

Feel the weight of my silence,
I swim from my ocean's past,
I argue with the wind,
Covered with that verse that I hate,
I travel to my faint space,
Searching for my borrowed corner,
My pace is invisible, deliberate is my step,
Mistake is my reflection, taken for the night,
Match with a cause,
My shelter is my function,
My odd is my curse.

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  1. Date: 2/1/2013 8:48:00 AM
    I see this oldie of yours had gotten featured and I see why. it's wonderful, Sean!!

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 7:55:00 PM
    This is a very briliant write. Sometimes we have to come face to face with ourselves. You are in the right place. A place where you can travel through your poetry and others and explore new Horizons. welcome to the Soup. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 11:05:00 AM
    I so love the metaphors you used very unique! I am not sure you want the word [odd] in the last line did you? Or did you want Ode? Thanks so much for making me aware of Margie's age. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 10:16:00 AM
    Nicely done Sean,,,,,

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 8:22:00 AM
    This is an excellent write here Sean!!

  1. Date: 8/29/2011 10:53:00 AM
    Congratulations Sean on your fine poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/2/2011 3:30:00 AM
    Beautifully Written. I luv it!!!!!!