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Just Can't Stop

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Just Can't Stop

It's a game in itself
lies, lust, and agression.
They say,"you're playing a game"
well, hun class in session.
It's this complex idea that you're not alone,
you have a God given mate.
Well most won't find them
the sex, the money, and the dates.
Caught up in a theory of epic proportion
when it's minor, and quite simple.
It's only to fill the emptiness
then the heartbreaks seem to ripple.
Like a stone in the water
skipping on top.
It's just a game,
so addictive you can't stop.

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  1. Date: 8/3/2011 11:58:00 AM

    When th soul is ready to settle down, it will settle down ! Touching write dear poet ! much love, james

  1. Date: 7/26/2011 10:23:00 PM

    Thanks guys. (:

  1. Date: 7/26/2011 2:36:00 PM

    i like very much, reminds me of me, many years ago. good poetry

  1. Date: 7/26/2011 1:50:00 PM

    Hope you are having a wonderful week Olivia. I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/26/2011 1:18:00 PM

    insightful, sounds like you've had some bad experiences sorry to hear that...Great write....God bless Old Jack