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Are You the Door

The union of love is complete . . . The moment of passion is gone . . . She lies in my arms And tenderly, Her fingers move across my skin. It is then That a greater love Mysteriously Is revealed. Her soul And Mine Mingle and move together Like the mists in the trees by the river. . . . Silently . . . The fusion of spirits takes place In a world without words . . . The holding The gentle whispers The brushing of tender lips, Blending our souls into one. Sweet passion, Are you the door?

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  1. Date: 10/7/2012 9:50:00 AM

    Reading this poem again,,, enjoyed..pd

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 4:39:00 AM

    This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

  1. Date: 1/4/2012 5:24:00 AM

    Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals William. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/2/2011 6:53:00 AM

    Passion...it's always the question isn't it. Nice work.

    Crocker Avatar William Crocker Date: 10/7/2011 7:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Bret,Thanks for your comment.I believe your right. Crossfox
  1. Date: 9/27/2011 3:26:00 PM

    Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week Bill. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/21/2011 9:20:00 PM

    Excellent write William... a romantic piece...thanks so much for sharing.....smiles....chiquita

  1. Date: 7/26/2011 11:41:00 AM

    cracking romance. brilliant poetry, love it

    Crocker Avatar William Crocker Date: 7/26/2011 1:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Steven, I needed this perk this morning.Only another passionate poet would feel this way. I'm new here and will be getting to your poems soon.Thanks ,William C.