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I Needed You,But Where Were You

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I Needed You,But Where Were You

I wanted your love,
Needed your love,
But you couldn't pull through,
Of all the promises you made,
And I just wonder if the love you say that you had,
Was true from the beginning.
And yes, I loved you,
I wanted what was best,
But the walls built around your heart
Wouldn't allow you to see it,
And I tried to make it clear,
If it had been any clearer
The sight would have blinded you.
I wanted to be able to lie in your chest
And cry if I needed to
But you weren't there
And you couldn't see how I was hurting,
You couldn't tell that I didn't feel the love,
That you so claimed to have.
But I realize now,
That there's someone out there who's better.

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  1. Date: 7/26/2011 10:21:00 AM
    It feels so good to be able to sit here and read your very creative writing this morning Jasmine. I do hope to come back soon and read more of your excellent work. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/25/2011 11:39:00 PM
    strong and passionate words - Kyle