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You and she

I asked what’s worse than death, You say people that help you survive. You say: “ I don’t feel anything anymore.” You make every one out to be your enemy, But your enemy itself is you! You say that none of us care, When it’s you that don’t care. You say that none of us love you, When it’s you that doesn’t love yourself. You say you have a very empty feeling, When you are the only one that can fill it. You say we broke you down emotionally, When it was you, yourself who did it, By not talking about the things that bothered you. You say: “ I can’t go on.” When you know you can, with help, make it. You feel sorry for yourself, When you should feel sorry for those who love you. You only think of yourself and you don’t See the suffer in the eyes of other. To me she died a few days ago. To me you are a total stranger. My heart is struck with sorrow For the monster she become destroyed Everything good that’s left. To me you are a nobody, Because she would never have done What sorrow you did. To me you don’t exist, For she would never destroy What’s good in life. If only she could be here, She would clean up the destruction You caused. If she was here She would have thought of us and never Cause so much sorrow. You know time choose you, You can not choose time. For time and place and how Is special itself. Why put yourself through so much, Pain, when it is not your time to go. Where is home: heaven, earth or hell, How would you know? You sound and act so pathetic, She would never have done that. Why should I feel sorry for you. It is only you, you care about. I’ll rather weep for the person you hide Just to become a self-conscious monster When it’s only you that can stop.

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  1. Date: 1/4/2012 5:15:00 AM
    Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Tanya. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 6:20:00 AM
    Congratulations on being featured this week Tanya. Love, Carol

    celliers Avatar tanya celliers
    Date: 12/5/2011 2:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanx carrol
  1. Date: 11/16/2011 2:42:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, tanya

    celliers Avatar tanya celliers
    Date: 12/5/2011 2:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you
  1. Date: 8/29/2011 9:13:00 PM
    Tanya, CONGRATULATIONS !! On your poem being featured this week. Stopping by to read every poem on the home page. I truly enjoyed your strong view.... here,,, thanks for sharing,..p.d.

    celliers Avatar tanya celliers
    Date: 8/30/2011 5:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanx, my view in this poem is what i experianced when someone close tried to comit suicide. I guess that some emotional rollercoasters are trully deep and sometimes undescribable but poetry can paint a true picture though.. thanx for enjoying my poems. Tanya
  1. Date: 8/29/2011 10:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week Tanya. Love, Carol

    celliers Avatar tanya celliers
    Date: 8/29/2011 2:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanx carol, This is a first for me but it feels good and Thanks for enjoying my poems!!