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Country Side

There's this void in me, 
that I thought you had filled.
You held me in your arms, 
and away went my guilt.
The warmth of your skin,
burned me to the core.
The fire that torched my soul, 
kept me wanting more.
Knees buckled and my stomach lurched,
I couldn't get enough.
Your bruised knuckles and country side,
and my soft skin andagainst your fingers to rough.
You were never mine, 
but it's like you left me for her.
your blue eyes and freckled skin,
My heart tattered, I'm bitter.
I need you back,
all I can see is you back with me.
You're the best thing I could ever get,
though it's very hard for you too see.

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  1. Date: 7/24/2011 7:41:00 PM

    sensual, emotional, sexual.....Nice write......Best wishes....Old Jack

    Huddleston Avatar Olivia Huddleston Date: 7/24/2011 9:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks.(: