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The Journey of a Soul

The soul left the cares below
A little sad to let it all melt
And looked towards the light aglow
Darkness all around he felt
No idea what fate he will be dealt
When sparks around him started to fly
As he was sucked up in this fiery belt
The time had come to say his final goodbye

22/07/2011
By Tahera Mannan
For Nette’s ‘Hutain this one’ contest


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  1. Date: 8/4/2011 8:36:00 PM

    Excellent, very well done. Very descriptive. Congratulations on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 8/4/2011 1:32:00 PM

    Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Tahera

  1. Date: 8/4/2011 11:41:00 AM

    Wow, so many contest results again! Many congrats for all your wins : )

  1. Date: 8/4/2011 9:23:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Hutain" contest Tahera. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/4/2011 6:18:00 AM

    Congrads to you too my sweet friend!

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 11:44:00 PM

    tahera, I love the spirtual slant you gave your entry. Well done, my friend, and congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 10:28:00 PM

    Congratulations Tahera!!! Nicely expressed.

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 5:36:00 PM

    congrats Tahera on your exciting win in Hutain contest with these amazing words of entry luv.. kudos to u..

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 3:27:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in the HUTAIN THIS ONE...contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud. Good job! Blessings, Caryl

  1. Date: 7/25/2011 12:44:00 AM

    Nicely written for the contest,TAHERA

  1. Date: 7/23/2011 1:53:00 PM

    nice one Tahera and good luck in the contest/ they are alot of fun